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3/13/2007 c1 angelgrl
o...me like this one too. love the way you always end your poems with some kind of bang that leaves the reader in a state of awe of ur writng.
3/4/2006 c1 Decollage
It's funny. Everyone dies, but not everyone lives.

Maybe it's not better to have loved and lost than never loved at all. The loss hurts too much.
2/16/2006 c1 6Death by Dangerous Driving
Whoa! Weird ending. But yeah, I think it's cool. Thinking of *coughalexcoughhammcoughond* or *coughjamescoughlicoughcough*?Hehehe.
8/14/2005 c1 1Infinite Abyss
Great poem.
6/22/2005 c1 5luxian
wow!love the emotions that you encapture in this poem. The single worded lines have a great effect ^^oh and to answer your question...i have put the chapters in one story...called 'diary of an assassin-WHOLE STORY' :P and thnx for the review!
12/21/2004 c1 17Odyssey2469
Painful… The emotions you express are true to their nature, you can see the angst and pain that they hold. I too felt hollow when the worst hit me a few months ago…

Well Written ~ Odyssey2469

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