for The Lovliest Shade of Red4/19/2005 c1 AethraZip
It's not strange, it's pretty. In a rather odd way.. I liked it. And.. uh, I'm not in a critiquing kind of mood. Can you tell? Anyway, it's a nice poem. *glances around* Wow. 'Nice'. I'm really out of it. Sorry...
It's not strange, it's pretty. In a rather odd way.. I liked it. And.. uh, I'm not in a critiquing kind of mood. Can you tell? Anyway, it's a nice poem. *glances around* Wow. 'Nice'. I'm really out of it. Sorry...
12/21/2004 c1 
232karmakaze
This is really neat. I like the imagery.
As for the losers and gamers, there are problems in those groups too (as for some kids, gaming is a drug in and of itself.) I knew some kids who were very messed up in the head who were in both of those last year.
The poem (yours) is interesting, because it could probably be interpreted in different ways, with the marble skin and the shades of red. Nice work.
232karmakazeThis is really neat. I like the imagery.
As for the losers and gamers, there are problems in those groups too (as for some kids, gaming is a drug in and of itself.) I knew some kids who were very messed up in the head who were in both of those last year.
The poem (yours) is interesting, because it could probably be interpreted in different ways, with the marble skin and the shades of red. Nice work.
12/21/2004 c1 105theCoffeeEnzyme
This is a very good poem. I sall have to remember not to bring my grammer book to class someday so I can write something this good. lol . Anyhoo, it's definitely going into my favorites.
105theCoffeeEnzymeThis is a very good poem. I sall have to remember not to bring my grammer book to class someday so I can write something this good. lol . Anyhoo, it's definitely going into my favorites.