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8/8/2005 c1 Andrew Moss
i think this has got to be one of the stupidest stories i have ever read i mean i LOVE a good joke but this is not funny it screams unintellectuable and the plot is predictable i seriously think ive heard a joke like this before at least that one had a decent plot line, well developed characters,and a point to it.this is the worst story ive ever read!1
3/5/2005 c1 73An Inside Joke
Sounds like Nick got off pretty angry. This story would be better if you added a little charecterization- you know, describe, for example, how Jacqueline felt when she found out Nick was cheating with Brittany. Did she deny it for a few seconds? Was she hurt? Angry? Relieved? Try to describe more than just actions and dialouge.
1/7/2005 c1 2Blessings

your story seems like its gonna b really funny! It's great so far!
1/7/2005 c1 7tickle-me-pretty15
Tat was really funny. Makes me wish i did that i sang that to my Ex boyfriend years ago lol, but instead i kicked him in the balls and said we were overXD Well thaxies for the stories toodles ~tickles~
1/4/2005 c1 14C. Catlin
Hello! I noticed that you finaly got some works in so I decided to give 'um a review. this peice really needs to be more descriptive. I have no idea who any of the chariters are, what they look like, where they are or anything. Other then that the plots pretty good.
12/26/2004 c1 Mychael Lynne
Oh, that was kewl ^^
12/26/2004 c1 6co0kieCrazii
o0o nice story! great ideas...anyways..thanks for all your reviews! haha they make me so happie : )
12/26/2004 c1 3airborne
Great idea wish it was longer, but anohow great idea!
12/22/2004 c1 1KittyKittyKittenz
That was a good idea, a very good idea...
12/22/2004 c1 11ClassyMinx
Nice! Really good! Really fun! Mind reading poetry if thatz not to boring? :D
12/21/2004 c1 Blaze
That was an utter waste of serever space and time. Thanks for taking two precious minutes of my life that i will never regain. THANKS ALOT!
12/21/2004 c1 18It's Time For Mystery Man
12/21/2004 c1 20Demon Donatello
...interesting. The idea behind it was excellent. Keep writing.
12/21/2004 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
Oh lord hahaha funny...nice JoJo song...though I think you should have made up your own song. Cute write though reminded me of some sort of teen movie.
12/21/2004 c1 13Sir Whiteroses
Great story
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