for Leave Get Out8/8/2005 c1 Andrew Moss
i think this has got to be one of the stupidest stories i have ever read i mean i LOVE a good joke but this is not funny it screams unintellectuable and the plot is predictable i seriously think ive heard a joke like this before at least that one had a decent plot line, well developed characters,and a point to it.this is the worst story ive ever read!1
i think this has got to be one of the stupidest stories i have ever read i mean i LOVE a good joke but this is not funny it screams unintellectuable and the plot is predictable i seriously think ive heard a joke like this before at least that one had a decent plot line, well developed characters,and a point to it.this is the worst story ive ever read!1
3/5/2005 c1 
73An Inside Joke
Sounds like Nick got off pretty angry. This story would be better if you added a little charecterization- you know, describe, for example, how Jacqueline felt when she found out Nick was cheating with Brittany. Did she deny it for a few seconds? Was she hurt? Angry? Relieved? Try to describe more than just actions and dialouge.
73An Inside JokeSounds like Nick got off pretty angry. This story would be better if you added a little charecterization- you know, describe, for example, how Jacqueline felt when she found out Nick was cheating with Brittany. Did she deny it for a few seconds? Was she hurt? Angry? Relieved? Try to describe more than just actions and dialouge.
1/7/2005 c1 7tickle-me-pretty15
Tat was really funny. Makes me wish i did that i sang that to my Ex boyfriend years ago lol, but instead i kicked him in the balls and said we were overXD Well thaxies for the stories toodles ~tickles~
7tickle-me-pretty15Tat was really funny. Makes me wish i did that i sang that to my Ex boyfriend years ago lol, but instead i kicked him in the balls and said we were overXD Well thaxies for the stories toodles ~tickles~
1/4/2005 c1 14C. Catlin
Hello! I noticed that you finaly got some works in so I decided to give 'um a review. this peice really needs to be more descriptive. I have no idea who any of the chariters are, what they look like, where they are or anything. Other then that the plots pretty good.
14C. CatlinHello! I noticed that you finaly got some works in so I decided to give 'um a review. this peice really needs to be more descriptive. I have no idea who any of the chariters are, what they look like, where they are or anything. Other then that the plots pretty good.
12/26/2004 c1 6co0kieCrazii
o0o nice story! great ideas...anyways..thanks for all your reviews! haha they make me so happie : )
6co0kieCraziio0o nice story! great ideas...anyways..thanks for all your reviews! haha they make me so happie : )
12/22/2004 c1 11ClassyMinx
Nice! Really good! Really fun! Mind reading poetry if thatz not to boring? :D
11ClassyMinxNice! Really good! Really fun! Mind reading poetry if thatz not to boring? :D
12/21/2004 c1 Blaze
That was an utter waste of serever space and time. Thanks for taking two precious minutes of my life that i will never regain. THANKS ALOT!
That was an utter waste of serever space and time. Thanks for taking two precious minutes of my life that i will never regain. THANKS ALOT!
12/21/2004 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
Oh lord hahaha funny...nice JoJo song...though I think you should have made up your own song. Cute write though reminded me of some sort of teen movie.
24Sarah-BrighteyesOh lord hahaha funny...nice JoJo song...though I think you should have made up your own song. Cute write though reminded me of some sort of teen movie.