1/30/2005 c1 22GjK
This is great, exept for abbreviated U. It just doesn't flow as well, in my opinion it should really be written out.

12/21/2004 c1 12Anray Jzitusia
That is hardcore. I have not read anything like this for a long time. It is very true and very sad. Keep writing.Anray Jzitusia

12/21/2004 c1 3Close Your Eyes and Dream
i like it. it's really good. because if I read poetry that i think really sucks, then i don't review it...