for Stirring Inertia7/31/2005 c1 
337Luthiena o Lorien
I thought this poem was way way way to simple. Not deep enough, it was just..there. Like something in a textbook. Bland, I hate to say. Bland.
337Luthiena o LorienI thought this poem was way way way to simple. Not deep enough, it was just..there. Like something in a textbook. Bland, I hate to say. Bland.
3/11/2005 c1 13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
Wow! That was really good. I haven't read anything quite like it. Your flow of words was excellent.
~Nikki~
13XxDragon Princess NikkixXWow! That was really good. I haven't read anything quite like it. Your flow of words was excellent.
~Nikki~
12/24/2004 c1 49SleepDontWeep
whoa .. it started out so dark and poignant and then it just bloomed and turned into this mind blowingly beautiful realisation that happiness is a possibility and medication isnt bad.. and i dunno wot else to say.. its just amazing!WEll DONE!love and admiration Gretchen45 xplease review my story 'Truly madly deeply'.tanx xitd mean alot!
49SleepDontWeepwhoa .. it started out so dark and poignant and then it just bloomed and turned into this mind blowingly beautiful realisation that happiness is a possibility and medication isnt bad.. and i dunno wot else to say.. its just amazing!WEll DONE!love and admiration Gretchen45 xplease review my story 'Truly madly deeply'.tanx xitd mean alot!
12/22/2004 c1 24she's not breathing
first before i get to this, i really need to say thanks. your reviews are really helpful. you don't flame, but you're constructive, and it's obvious you actually read things through. some people don't. i like this poem; your capitalization of certain letters lends a personification to those words. personally i think it was stronger in the beginning and then at the end it tapered off, but i usually say that when poems like these become all positive at the end. personal oversight. nicely done, though. Apathetic Excuses - you wrote that like a name, telling it to go. really concise, really sharp. nice.
~k8
24she's not breathingfirst before i get to this, i really need to say thanks. your reviews are really helpful. you don't flame, but you're constructive, and it's obvious you actually read things through. some people don't. i like this poem; your capitalization of certain letters lends a personification to those words. personally i think it was stronger in the beginning and then at the end it tapered off, but i usually say that when poems like these become all positive at the end. personal oversight. nicely done, though. Apathetic Excuses - you wrote that like a name, telling it to go. really concise, really sharp. nice.
~k8