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7/31/2005 c1 337Luthiena o Lorien
I thought this poem was way way way to simple. Not deep enough, it was just..there. Like something in a textbook. Bland, I hate to say. Bland.
3/11/2005 c1 13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
Wow! That was really good. I haven't read anything quite like it. Your flow of words was excellent.

12/24/2004 c1 49SleepDontWeep
whoa .. it started out so dark and poignant and then it just bloomed and turned into this mind blowingly beautiful realisation that happiness is a possibility and medication isnt bad.. and i dunno wot else to say.. its just amazing!WEll DONE!love and admiration Gretchen45 xplease review my story 'Truly madly deeply'.tanx xitd mean alot!
12/22/2004 c1 24she's not breathing
first before i get to this, i really need to say thanks. your reviews are really helpful. you don't flame, but you're constructive, and it's obvious you actually read things through. some people don't. i like this poem; your capitalization of certain letters lends a personification to those words. personally i think it was stronger in the beginning and then at the end it tapered off, but i usually say that when poems like these become all positive at the end. personal oversight. nicely done, though. Apathetic Excuses - you wrote that like a name, telling it to go. really concise, really sharp. nice.


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