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6/19/2005 c1 1Infinite Abyss
Great poem.
5/26/2005 c1 6Samantha Cleary
I'm totally digging this poem. I love the imagery... it just flows in my mind as it goes. Crazy, crazy, crazy. Lovely work, keep at it. ^-^
5/14/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
very well worded and beautiful poem! keep up the great work!
3/11/2005 c1 13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
I really liked this one! It's one of my favorites of yours. Particularly these lines:

The lazy breeze whispers

What does it tell?

Stories of frozen water

Golden sand

Lover’s farewell?


Feel deeply

You cannot go wrong

Let your heart take you

To a somewhere

You never belonged

Really great! *hugz* Love ya!

1/22/2005 c1 6ZaphodChick
Beautiful and really nicely written! I love your word choice and this was just really well written! Good job!
12/24/2004 c1 8bulletproof.cupid
Hey Bads! Awesome; made me remember how much I loved (and still do) the wind blowing through my hair! ^_^ Your should write more... definitely! L8er...
12/24/2004 c1 21Phoenix-Pen
This is very expressive; clear and thoughtful. The bit about the creaking door caught my attention particularly: one of my flatmate's doors creaks, and I'm dying to sit down one day and write its story!

I love the fact that imagination can take us anywhere and create anything. You express that very well.
12/22/2004 c1 24she's not breathing
hi again. i think i like this better than your other one. more obscure. tangible in its hesitant fragile tone. really nice, haha. and i like how it kinda goes all over the place, even though there IS a main message. it doesn't constrict the poetry. awesome job.

12/22/2004 c1 7BeautifulEcho
good choices of words. some parts that were confusing though, but everything seemed to flow, so it turned out well. good job and keep on keepin' on


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