for Creation5/26/2005 c1 
6Samantha Cleary
I'm totally digging this poem. I love the imagery... it just flows in my mind as it goes. Crazy, crazy, crazy. Lovely work, keep at it. ^-^
6Samantha ClearyI'm totally digging this poem. I love the imagery... it just flows in my mind as it goes. Crazy, crazy, crazy. Lovely work, keep at it. ^-^
3/11/2005 c1 13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
I really liked this one! It's one of my favorites of yours. Particularly these lines:
The lazy breeze whispers
What does it tell?
Stories of frozen water
Golden sand
Lover’s farewell?
-
Feel deeply
You cannot go wrong
Let your heart take you
To a somewhere
You never belonged
Really great! *hugz* Love ya!
~Nikki~
13XxDragon Princess NikkixXI really liked this one! It's one of my favorites of yours. Particularly these lines:
The lazy breeze whispers
What does it tell?
Stories of frozen water
Golden sand
Lover’s farewell?
-
Feel deeply
You cannot go wrong
Let your heart take you
To a somewhere
You never belonged
Really great! *hugz* Love ya!
~Nikki~
1/22/2005 c1 6ZaphodChick
Beautiful and really nicely written! I love your word choice and this was just really well written! Good job!
6ZaphodChickBeautiful and really nicely written! I love your word choice and this was just really well written! Good job!
12/24/2004 c1 8bulletproof.cupid
Hey Bads! Awesome; made me remember how much I loved (and still do) the wind blowing through my hair! ^_^ Your should write more... definitely! L8er...
8bulletproof.cupidHey Bads! Awesome; made me remember how much I loved (and still do) the wind blowing through my hair! ^_^ Your should write more... definitely! L8er...
12/24/2004 c1 21Phoenix-Pen
This is very expressive; clear and thoughtful. The bit about the creaking door caught my attention particularly: one of my flatmate's doors creaks, and I'm dying to sit down one day and write its story!
I love the fact that imagination can take us anywhere and create anything. You express that very well.
21Phoenix-PenThis is very expressive; clear and thoughtful. The bit about the creaking door caught my attention particularly: one of my flatmate's doors creaks, and I'm dying to sit down one day and write its story!
I love the fact that imagination can take us anywhere and create anything. You express that very well.
12/22/2004 c1 24she's not breathing
hi again. i think i like this better than your other one. more obscure. tangible in its hesitant fragile tone. really nice, haha. and i like how it kinda goes all over the place, even though there IS a main message. it doesn't constrict the poetry. awesome job.
~k8
24she's not breathinghi again. i think i like this better than your other one. more obscure. tangible in its hesitant fragile tone. really nice, haha. and i like how it kinda goes all over the place, even though there IS a main message. it doesn't constrict the poetry. awesome job.
~k8
12/22/2004 c1 7BeautifulEcho
good choices of words. some parts that were confusing though, but everything seemed to flow, so it turned out well. good job and keep on keepin' on
~BeautifulEcho~
7BeautifulEchogood choices of words. some parts that were confusing though, but everything seemed to flow, so it turned out well. good job and keep on keepin' on
~BeautifulEcho~