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12/22/2004 c1 298Moon-Chaser
I could feel your anxity as you claw at your mask. Really powerful writing you had me right there with you, feeling what you feel.

Keep it up.
12/22/2004 c1 24she's not breathing
wow. i love the feel of it. breaking at the seems, tracing the newsprint ... really powerful imagery. to me, it's that kind of symbolism that resonates. dunno. could be a weird thing i have. you draw the reader into this really well. great job! do me a favour and check out something i've written?

~k8

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