for Seven1/17/2005 c1 
3Wandering Rambler of Insanity
very good i like it, its dramatic and spiritual all in one, i like it very much! write more! talks to ya's latters', wanderingdragon
3Wandering Rambler of Insanityvery good i like it, its dramatic and spiritual all in one, i like it very much! write more! talks to ya's latters', wanderingdragon
1/1/2005 c1 64not sure yet
maybe me think of the movie seven, fairly good flow to this, muchly enjoyed it
64not sure yetmaybe me think of the movie seven, fairly good flow to this, muchly enjoyed it
12/25/2004 c1 136LilLaTLuv
Hey!
Peculiar! I like. Well, thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked my review! Good job on this! Keep it up!
Luv ya,Tashi :)
136LilLaTLuvHey!
Peculiar! I like. Well, thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked my review! Good job on this! Keep it up!
Luv ya,Tashi :)
12/23/2004 c1 16Queen of the Insects
I'm not quite sure which religion this poem is written for, what with the mention of seven days, Dionysus, and the seven deadly sins. But the emotion is very strong, and it is very well written. Good job!
16Queen of the InsectsI'm not quite sure which religion this poem is written for, what with the mention of seven days, Dionysus, and the seven deadly sins. But the emotion is very strong, and it is very well written. Good job!
12/23/2004 c1 1Author-of-new-discoveries
o my god. THIS IS ONE OF THE FEW POEMS that gave me goosebumps. SPLENDID! SPLENDID! BRAVO!
Honestly, it made me think after i read it. I grabbed my pen and analyzed each line. My analysis goes like this:
the 1st 4 lines speaks of the SEVENTH DAY where god has rested after creating humanity.
the next 4 lines speaks of SUNDAY being the SEVENTH day where people are in church praising him and his son Jesus.
the next 4 lines speaks of the month JULY (the SEVENTH MONTH), as to it is the month America got it's independence. Dionysus (if i am not mistaken, he is the GOD OF WINE) was an allusion to show the festivity mood.
the penultimate 4 lines speaks of the SEVEN deadly sins, in which men should get rid off.
the last 4 lines are means of "conclusion" that says SEVEN gave time to happiness and loneliness as well.
"whoa, no wonder the title is SEVEN" lol
GOOD WRITE! ...If only I had ten thumbs, I'd give it ten thumbs up!
1Author-of-new-discoverieso my god. THIS IS ONE OF THE FEW POEMS that gave me goosebumps. SPLENDID! SPLENDID! BRAVO!
Honestly, it made me think after i read it. I grabbed my pen and analyzed each line. My analysis goes like this:
the 1st 4 lines speaks of the SEVENTH DAY where god has rested after creating humanity.
the next 4 lines speaks of SUNDAY being the SEVENTH day where people are in church praising him and his son Jesus.
the next 4 lines speaks of the month JULY (the SEVENTH MONTH), as to it is the month America got it's independence. Dionysus (if i am not mistaken, he is the GOD OF WINE) was an allusion to show the festivity mood.
the penultimate 4 lines speaks of the SEVEN deadly sins, in which men should get rid off.
the last 4 lines are means of "conclusion" that says SEVEN gave time to happiness and loneliness as well.
"whoa, no wonder the title is SEVEN" lol
GOOD WRITE! ...If only I had ten thumbs, I'd give it ten thumbs up!
12/23/2004 c1 55AtticusOnline
This poem actually made me say "Woah". It is a great poem! You're one of those people where this stuff just comes completely natural to you. Bravo. I give it THREE THUMBS UP!
55AtticusOnlineThis poem actually made me say "Woah". It is a great poem! You're one of those people where this stuff just comes completely natural to you. Bravo. I give it THREE THUMBS UP!
12/23/2004 c1 75clockwork kiss
I find it odd but thought provoking that you would create a poem about God and then compare his actions to Greek mythology. Were you making a derogatory point? The Dionysus part I understand completely; it's the Promethean kit part that gets me. Hmm. I shall go ponder. Go job; you made me think. Anyways... some of the word choice was great, some was a bit too simplistic for my tastes. Also, the tense-switching peeved me, especially in the first line, and I don't think you did it on purpose. If you did, I'm stupid, but ehh. Overall, not bad. I enjoyed reading.
75clockwork kissI find it odd but thought provoking that you would create a poem about God and then compare his actions to Greek mythology. Were you making a derogatory point? The Dionysus part I understand completely; it's the Promethean kit part that gets me. Hmm. I shall go ponder. Go job; you made me think. Anyways... some of the word choice was great, some was a bit too simplistic for my tastes. Also, the tense-switching peeved me, especially in the first line, and I don't think you did it on purpose. If you did, I'm stupid, but ehh. Overall, not bad. I enjoyed reading.