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12/23/2004 c1 94smile persephone
It's cute! It's sort of like a nursery rhyme.
12/23/2004 c1 9Meaningless Julia
i really like the basic idea of this, but perhaps the ending needs tightening a bit. I feel there's a loss of energy towards the end. This is very sweet, though. You write well. Well done.

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