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12/23/2004 c1 13Artificial Refuge
I like it. It has an awesome message, and I like how you managed to get that across without having to really spell it out for the reader. Great writing!
12/23/2004 c1 3FurballofEvilness
Heh, very nice. It's always nice to leave your readers with a bit of lee-way at the end. I thoroughly approve.

I also like the little message (which I won't point out as that would be a spoiler)

But I liked the last verse best, because that was where I was like: 'Oo. I gets it. NEAT!'

So awesome job, my friend.

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