for Everything I Never Wanted: Original7/13/2008 c33 
4Morgan Davis
i am glad you are redoing this actually. i thought it was okay where it was... but it was just okay. now i am sure it will be alot better. i will be following along when you rewrite it! good luck!
4Morgan Davisi am glad you are redoing this actually. i thought it was okay where it was... but it was just okay. now i am sure it will be alot better. i will be following along when you rewrite it! good luck!
7/10/2008 c32 ChristianAngel01
Wow! I am speechless I am sorry, but words can not describe How much this story is to put it simply Its AMAZING and I LOVE IT!
Wow! I am speechless I am sorry, but words can not describe How much this story is to put it simply Its AMAZING and I LOVE IT!
7/9/2008 c33 The light of darkness
'...started this story back in 2004, when I was 14, I’m 20 now...'
Its 2008. It means you are 18, or you were 16 when you started. Sorry, cant help but notice it doesn't match up.
Looking forward to the rewritten story. Best of luck and heath.
'...started this story back in 2004, when I was 14, I’m 20 now...'
Its 2008. It means you are 18, or you were 16 when you started. Sorry, cant help but notice it doesn't match up.
Looking forward to the rewritten story. Best of luck and heath.
7/9/2008 c33 neverliveindoubt
I understand the need of any author to re write what has been published. So I will love to see the revised version of this wonderful story... Just a minor question for you:
Will you just take down all of the chapters and re-post them in this story. Or will you take down this story and make a new one?
I understand the need of any author to re write what has been published. So I will love to see the revised version of this wonderful story... Just a minor question for you:
Will you just take down all of the chapters and re-post them in this story. Or will you take down this story and make a new one?
6/8/2008 c32 cyanidecandy
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i love damien's character, except the part where he punished casey :(
he's still awesome nonetheless.
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i love damien's character, except the part where he punished casey :(
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5/29/2008 c32 notwithoutyou
Please update! This is a great story. Hopefully Casey realises that she's falling in love with Damien. *sigh* Update soon, even though you haven't done so in quite a while. It would be great if you could continue the story! :)
Please update! This is a great story. Hopefully Casey realises that she's falling in love with Damien. *sigh* Update soon, even though you haven't done so in quite a while. It would be great if you could continue the story! :)
5/25/2008 c32 4LittleEmoKid
OMG! I can truely say I love this story! Please, please update soon! I have a few stories out now! Please can you just read them and review! A writer as good as you, hell, I could really used your imput! Love you ever so much for putting this up! If you don't update soon I may turn violent. *twitches and laughs crazily*
4LittleEmoKidOMG! I can truely say I love this story! Please, please update soon! I have a few stories out now! Please can you just read them and review! A writer as good as you, hell, I could really used your imput! Love you ever so much for putting this up! If you don't update soon I may turn violent. *twitches and laughs crazily*
5/11/2008 c32 AChiMiDice
I don't think your story is horrible at all! In fact, I really really like it - I read the entire thing up to this point in one sitting. I think your writing has gotten better and better as the story has gone on. I'm with the multitude that adores Damien and wants Casey to finally give in and realize what she feels. I hope the hiatus for this story doesn't last long :)
I don't think your story is horrible at all! In fact, I really really like it - I read the entire thing up to this point in one sitting. I think your writing has gotten better and better as the story has gone on. I'm with the multitude that adores Damien and wants Casey to finally give in and realize what she feels. I hope the hiatus for this story doesn't last long :)
4/1/2008 c32 jd
this is a great story please continue writing
this is a great story please continue writing
3/16/2008 c1 Renae
This story is obviously in the wrong catergory if the author actually thinks torture is an act of love then she's sick!
This story is obviously in the wrong catergory if the author actually thinks torture is an act of love then she's sick!