for Rather it is Commitment8/26/2005 c1 
11Not so Average
Another piece that I can relate to completely. It sucks that you can't relive the parts of your life that you treasure the most (well, for me, anyway). I'm off to read more of your writing, you're very talented.
11Not so AverageAnother piece that I can relate to completely. It sucks that you can't relive the parts of your life that you treasure the most (well, for me, anyway). I'm off to read more of your writing, you're very talented.
1/30/2005 c1 49Bleeding Ink
That is so beautiful. I love the last line. It's a perfect definition of commitment.-Jade
49Bleeding InkThat is so beautiful. I love the last line. It's a perfect definition of commitment.-Jade
12/30/2004 c1 Vigilant
This is not an epic sweeping story or poem. But it was not meant to be. The writing itself is does not push me in either a positive or nagative way, but you ask what this is; poem,prose? That does not matter, what it is, is heartfelt, and above anything else, thats what makes it shine.
Best to you as always, - Vigilant
This is not an epic sweeping story or poem. But it was not meant to be. The writing itself is does not push me in either a positive or nagative way, but you ask what this is; poem,prose? That does not matter, what it is, is heartfelt, and above anything else, thats what makes it shine.
Best to you as always, - Vigilant
12/25/2004 c1 Shadow of Isis
Considering the circumstances, I would say this is a natural reaction, and you expressed your feelings clearly and with feeling. I enjoying the shifting from phase to phase, it was all the better for it. We all put ourselves in our writing to some extent, poetry especially. This piece more than most others I would think.
Considering the circumstances, I would say this is a natural reaction, and you expressed your feelings clearly and with feeling. I enjoying the shifting from phase to phase, it was all the better for it. We all put ourselves in our writing to some extent, poetry especially. This piece more than most others I would think.