for Though I Try9/4/2010 c1 
20RaBBiT-In-The-Hole
I really like it. Love the beat and rhyme. Some of your other poems sounded a little forced and strained, but this one flows pretty well. Good job =]
20RaBBiT-In-The-HoleI really like it. Love the beat and rhyme. Some of your other poems sounded a little forced and strained, but this one flows pretty well. Good job =]
4/17/2010 c1 natmarie
A little forced rhyme, but it flows nicely. Definately a relate-able situation.
A little forced rhyme, but it flows nicely. Definately a relate-able situation.
3/8/2010 c1 18smurfdude
All I can really say is this was beautiful. No other words could have summed this up any better.
18smurfdudeAll I can really say is this was beautiful. No other words could have summed this up any better.
3/4/2010 c1 Moony08
This is nice!
I've always wanted to put these sort of feelings down, but it just never clicked.
Great job, and thanks for reviewing me!
This is nice!
I've always wanted to put these sort of feelings down, but it just never clicked.
Great job, and thanks for reviewing me!
3/1/2010 c1 13Ebrethiel
Read more like a song than a poem to me. The wording is really good, although I keep thinking that it would have made a much better non-rhyming poem. You did a great job with the rhymes, though and I can sense that a lot of emotion was put into this, which is a really good thing for poetry.
Keep up the good work.
13EbrethielRead more like a song than a poem to me. The wording is really good, although I keep thinking that it would have made a much better non-rhyming poem. You did a great job with the rhymes, though and I can sense that a lot of emotion was put into this, which is a really good thing for poetry.
Keep up the good work.
2/18/2010 c1 The NeverEnding Nightmare
This is really good.I can relate to the feeling of loving someone and feeling like you need them only to have them leave you. Keep writing.
This is really good.I can relate to the feeling of loving someone and feeling like you need them only to have them leave you. Keep writing.
2/18/2010 c1 RipplingEbbulience
Very very beautiful!
Love the rhyming...
It kind of reminds me of one of my poems- much awaited petrichor...
Well done!
Keep writing.
-Rippling ebullience
Very very beautiful!
Love the rhyming...
It kind of reminds me of one of my poems- much awaited petrichor...
Well done!
Keep writing.
-Rippling ebullience
2/2/2010 c1 6baconkittylover
I can totally realet to feeling that way, as you can see from my poem you read :) .
This is really good, and I like it a lot!
6baconkittyloverI can totally realet to feeling that way, as you can see from my poem you read :) .
This is really good, and I like it a lot!
1/27/2010 c1 1TragicScene
The main reason I loved this poem was because I could actually relate to it. It's a beautiful thing when a poet can connect to the audience. Keep up the good work :)
1TragicSceneThe main reason I loved this poem was because I could actually relate to it. It's a beautiful thing when a poet can connect to the audience. Keep up the good work :)
1/20/2010 c1 5AwesomeEyes
Amazingly Written. -claps all around- You should write more poems. Wish i could write like this.
Eyes
5AwesomeEyesAmazingly Written. -claps all around- You should write more poems. Wish i could write like this.
Eyes
1/6/2010 c1 23thinking.about.thinking
This is really sad, but beautiful. The longing is protrayed very nicely. All in all, I think it's feat that you made it rhyme, but the poem still worked out. For some reason, I can't do that.
23thinking.about.thinkingThis is really sad, but beautiful. The longing is protrayed very nicely. All in all, I think it's feat that you made it rhyme, but the poem still worked out. For some reason, I can't do that.
6/30/2007 c1 54Meg J. Martin
This poem reminds me of some of my creations, where I repeat words and sentances. Some of my fellow writers don't like that, but screw them it makes a good poem. Personally I cannot relate emotionally to this piece because I've never had a boyfriend :( Again, a job well done.
54Meg J. MartinThis poem reminds me of some of my creations, where I repeat words and sentances. Some of my fellow writers don't like that, but screw them it makes a good poem. Personally I cannot relate emotionally to this piece because I've never had a boyfriend :( Again, a job well done.