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for my first true hurt

12/27/2004 c1 miss-peake
This is really wonderfully written m'dear. There are a few grammatical errors and one typo mistake but nobody is perfect! and they didn't spoil the poem. I'm still angry about this incident though and wish I had been there to help you. But I'm so glad you're happy now!

*hugs*Keep writing and most of all keep smiling!
12/26/2004 c1 Ajna
Very sad and relatable... I really felt your emotions in this piece. Excellent job. I'm glad that you've moved on. =]

-Anathema

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