for Just Show Me The Light7/24/2005 c1 Marisa
My favorite so far. It flowed, it connected with me, I loved it.
My favorite so far. It flowed, it connected with me, I loved it.
4/2/2005 c1 ludicrous louie
wow...that was incredible! i really liked it...not too much more to say about it except that it really good...and original!
wow...that was incredible! i really liked it...not too much more to say about it except that it really good...and original!
3/31/2005 c1 
8A-wolf-called-Skya
it is dreamy, isn't it O-O good job thou. the imagery was well done. my favorite lines were these ones:
To lands beneath the seasTo oceans above the clouds
i love thoose lines ^^ they are wonderfully done!
good writing,
-Rachel.
*Every legend leaves a mark*
8A-wolf-called-Skyait is dreamy, isn't it O-O good job thou. the imagery was well done. my favorite lines were these ones:
To lands beneath the seasTo oceans above the clouds
i love thoose lines ^^ they are wonderfully done!
good writing,
-Rachel.
*Every legend leaves a mark*
1/9/2005 c1 19Leader of the Mushroom Militia
Tee hee ^^ Yes, I see what you mean - same titles. Nice poem though, it brings cool picures to mind XD 'dragons asleep' ... yes, cool ^^
19Leader of the Mushroom MilitiaTee hee ^^ Yes, I see what you mean - same titles. Nice poem though, it brings cool picures to mind XD 'dragons asleep' ... yes, cool ^^
12/30/2004 c1 Coni
cute! ^^ Yay for Author Alerts! This reminds me of "Give me the Light" by Sean Paul...I had it stuck in my head. :D
cute! ^^ Yay for Author Alerts! This reminds me of "Give me the Light" by Sean Paul...I had it stuck in my head. :D
12/26/2004 c1 29amazingblazes
This is really cool! I was a little thrown off by the use of "thy" in the second paragraph though. You could be a little more consistant there. In any case, this was a beautiful poem. I could picture the castle, and the clouds and the dragons all perfectly. Absoballylutely beautiful!
29amazingblazesThis is really cool! I was a little thrown off by the use of "thy" in the second paragraph though. You could be a little more consistant there. In any case, this was a beautiful poem. I could picture the castle, and the clouds and the dragons all perfectly. Absoballylutely beautiful!