for Love2/4/2012 c1 
105qubed
While love is beautiful and eternal, exclusive love is selfish, and finite.
Cultivate a grandiose love and you can never go wrong.
105qubedWhile love is beautiful and eternal, exclusive love is selfish, and finite.
Cultivate a grandiose love and you can never go wrong.
7/21/2010 c1 8dragonsroc
It's really good but, it brings to mind a picture of love that's only happyness but sometimes true love goes through its ups and downs. I know it sounds cheesy but it's my opinion of what love really is.
8dragonsrocIt's really good but, it brings to mind a picture of love that's only happyness but sometimes true love goes through its ups and downs. I know it sounds cheesy but it's my opinion of what love really is.
3/7/2010 c1 17EliMerriman
Aw. Good to see that not every love poem must be sad. Love is a wonderful feeling and this poem helps to describe it (though no words shall ever describe it). I think this is my favourite of all of your poems.
17EliMerrimanAw. Good to see that not every love poem must be sad. Love is a wonderful feeling and this poem helps to describe it (though no words shall ever describe it). I think this is my favourite of all of your poems.
3/1/2010 c1 13Ebrethiel
So far this is my favourite piece written by you. It flowed extremely smoothly and was a pleasure to read.
It seems none of my reviews to you have good things only, and I'm afraid it won't stop now :P
The last two lines just broke my flow of reading ... almost completely. And the very last part:
" will stretch across time and space for long. "
seems like you've thrown in the rhyming with "strong" and "long" just for the sake of rhyme, and it didn't really sound right.
Overall, another great poem. Nicely written and very enjoyable.
13EbrethielSo far this is my favourite piece written by you. It flowed extremely smoothly and was a pleasure to read.
It seems none of my reviews to you have good things only, and I'm afraid it won't stop now :P
The last two lines just broke my flow of reading ... almost completely. And the very last part:
" will stretch across time and space for long. "
seems like you've thrown in the rhyming with "strong" and "long" just for the sake of rhyme, and it didn't really sound right.
Overall, another great poem. Nicely written and very enjoyable.
1/20/2010 c1 16SarahMerriman
It is so nice to see a romance poem dedicated to the pleasure love can bring. So many love poems are about hearbreak. Those poems can be really good too, but it is just so refreshing to read a happy one. Beautiful. Keep at it.
16SarahMerrimanIt is so nice to see a romance poem dedicated to the pleasure love can bring. So many love poems are about hearbreak. Those poems can be really good too, but it is just so refreshing to read a happy one. Beautiful. Keep at it.
6/30/2005 c1 Kelsey
hi. I read a story on fanfiction.net and you said you had some poetry. I also write poetry, so it was great fun reading it.
As for the poem, I love how some lines rymed, some didnt. I love how you connected it to qupid.
Overall a great poem. I can tell that you are talented. Keep it up!
~Kelsey
hi. I read a story on fanfiction.net and you said you had some poetry. I also write poetry, so it was great fun reading it.
As for the poem, I love how some lines rymed, some didnt. I love how you connected it to qupid.
Overall a great poem. I can tell that you are talented. Keep it up!
~Kelsey
1/24/2005 c1 106cosmo-queen
Aw, this is really pretty. It's nice to come across such an uplifting poem. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenAw, this is really pretty. It's nice to come across such an uplifting poem. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*