
12/29/2004 c9
2city-gal7
i think that the story is too fast. If they were older...than it would make more sense. But except for that..its a pretty good story

i think that the story is too fast. If they were older...than it would make more sense. But except for that..its a pretty good story
12/28/2004 c9 His Only
Aww! What a sweet story! I really really like it. All the characters are great and Mike and Aaron seem like dream guys. But poor Mike! You had me really scared there. I thought he was gonna die! I can't wait to read more on the Holly and Aaron relationship. They are so cute together! Ok, well keep up the great work and UPDATE SOON!
Aww! What a sweet story! I really really like it. All the characters are great and Mike and Aaron seem like dream guys. But poor Mike! You had me really scared there. I thought he was gonna die! I can't wait to read more on the Holly and Aaron relationship. They are so cute together! Ok, well keep up the great work and UPDATE SOON!