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12/29/2004 c1 89Mir-Firiel
Hey, you already know how much I love this,but I thought I'd review it anyway. :D

My absolute favorite lines are these:

"The whirling flurries, winter's leaves

whispering through the morning's quiet

purple dawn now touched by crystals

glitter, glitter, bejeweled feathers"

By the way, this is my old greenbug67 account, in case you didn't notice. Same account, different name.
12/28/2004 c1 Sundazzle
This is the cutest poem! My favourite part is about the little kittens pawprints.The far off childrens laughter can be heard perfectly and the feel of a first snow is complete.

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