for Inside Out12/29/2004 c1 
99E.M. Laicrist
Hmm. Well, I your use of opposites reminds me somewhat of myself. But I like your structure the best. I like how every beginning letter isn't capitalized.
99E.M. LaicristHmm. Well, I your use of opposites reminds me somewhat of myself. But I like your structure the best. I like how every beginning letter isn't capitalized.
12/29/2004 c1 89Mir-Firiel
Hm...I don't quite get the last line. Oh well.
I do like these lines though:
"I smile at sadness and tears flow
for nothing at all
and for everything."
89Mir-FirielHm...I don't quite get the last line. Oh well.
I do like these lines though:
"I smile at sadness and tears flow
for nothing at all
and for everything."
12/28/2004 c1 Sundazzle
"Inside Out" This poem is,..(wow,hard to explain!)a poem that everyone can read and understand,yet its confusing.All about knowing something,yet not knowing it,or having many unanswerable questions.Written with honesty,I couldn't write this poem,I'd be fumbling,trying to get everyone to understand it better.Rainbow Dreams however seems to have no trouble in communicating her thoughts. ^-^
"Inside Out" This poem is,..(wow,hard to explain!)a poem that everyone can read and understand,yet its confusing.All about knowing something,yet not knowing it,or having many unanswerable questions.Written with honesty,I couldn't write this poem,I'd be fumbling,trying to get everyone to understand it better.Rainbow Dreams however seems to have no trouble in communicating her thoughts. ^-^