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12/29/2004 c1 99E.M. Laicrist
Hmm. Well, I your use of opposites reminds me somewhat of myself. But I like your structure the best. I like how every beginning letter isn't capitalized.
12/29/2004 c1 89Mir-Firiel
Hm...I don't quite get the last line. Oh well.

I do like these lines though:

"I smile at sadness and tears flow

for nothing at all

and for everything."
12/28/2004 c1 Sundazzle
"Inside Out" This poem is,..(wow,hard to explain!)a poem that everyone can read and understand,yet its confusing.All about knowing something,yet not knowing it,or having many unanswerable questions.Written with honesty,I couldn't write this poem,I'd be fumbling,trying to get everyone to understand it better.Rainbow Dreams however seems to have no trouble in communicating her thoughts. ^-^
12/28/2004 c1 9jdehn
interesting, it's okay.. Though I don't care much for the end. 'if things are fateful then what does that make fate'? ~no escape

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