
3/26/2022 c19 Guest
Wow for such an ancient and “wise” creature the one who remembers is unexpectedly prejudiced to shower the sins of all mankind on individuals without seeing who they are as people. This is especially weird since the inmri have this who adulthood ritual where they find who they are as individuals and he is the one who evaluates them on their true selves and gives em an appropriate name. Maybe for all his big talk about how bad humans are , he himself is the exact same. And lets not even het into the fact that the imri were as advanced if not more than humans. I doubt that such advance technology came about without some disregard for life (if not for other beings at least for nature) .
Wow for such an ancient and “wise” creature the one who remembers is unexpectedly prejudiced to shower the sins of all mankind on individuals without seeing who they are as people. This is especially weird since the inmri have this who adulthood ritual where they find who they are as individuals and he is the one who evaluates them on their true selves and gives em an appropriate name. Maybe for all his big talk about how bad humans are , he himself is the exact same. And lets not even het into the fact that the imri were as advanced if not more than humans. I doubt that such advance technology came about without some disregard for life (if not for other beings at least for nature) .
9/7/2017 c5 Guest
I've been vigorously nodding off to various things during Ford and Earthling's talk.
I've been vigorously nodding off to various things during Ford and Earthling's talk.
6/14/2016 c20 Guest
Zuzanny! What a pleasant surprise! I have been reading this since you first posted it and had given up hope for an update years ago. And then, randomly, I thought about this story and wanted to read it again and there was an update! It made my day 10000% better. I know writers block is a bitch but you seem to be pushing through. I will make sure to check up on this every now and then and maybe even read it from the beginning again. It is for sure one of my favorite originals.
Zuzanny! What a pleasant surprise! I have been reading this since you first posted it and had given up hope for an update years ago. And then, randomly, I thought about this story and wanted to read it again and there was an update! It made my day 10000% better. I know writers block is a bitch but you seem to be pushing through. I will make sure to check up on this every now and then and maybe even read it from the beginning again. It is for sure one of my favorite originals.
9/22/2015 c20 Meh
Don't tell me... Because of the main character choosing to defend his mate's people will bring about the great destruction that the 'holier than thou' harped on about?
I liked how Harry grew as a character but...
I hate it when there are god like oracles or whatever is introduced into the story. They tend to go on about how evil humans are and such but never explain why which makes me think less of their intelligence and so called omniscience. Which leads me to wonder why so many people go on about how evil humans are but have very little evidence. There's a lot of contradictions that turn me off but I'm probably over thinking this since it's just porn with a plot.
I don't know if you're going to update this but it'd be nice if you did for your fans.
Don't tell me... Because of the main character choosing to defend his mate's people will bring about the great destruction that the 'holier than thou' harped on about?
I liked how Harry grew as a character but...
I hate it when there are god like oracles or whatever is introduced into the story. They tend to go on about how evil humans are and such but never explain why which makes me think less of their intelligence and so called omniscience. Which leads me to wonder why so many people go on about how evil humans are but have very little evidence. There's a lot of contradictions that turn me off but I'm probably over thinking this since it's just porn with a plot.
I don't know if you're going to update this but it'd be nice if you did for your fans.
8/3/2015 c20 Megumu
Very very good story love the relationship between the two characters. Please more ? :)
Very very good story love the relationship between the two characters. Please more ? :)
2/20/2015 c20 Mark Owens
What an amazing chapter well worth the wait how extremely intoxicating is this storyline where did Zuzanny draw on such inspirational and intriguing concepts to create such a masterpiece
What an amazing chapter well worth the wait how extremely intoxicating is this storyline where did Zuzanny draw on such inspirational and intriguing concepts to create such a masterpiece
2/19/2015 c19 Mark Owens
So for now at chapter 19 this amazing story comes to a pause what an unbelievable talented author YOU are zuzzany what a journey what an adventure what beautiful images of sceenary what magical 3D characters and as for the storyline well that's just poetry from a very gifted author
So for now at chapter 19 this amazing story comes to a pause what an unbelievable talented author YOU are zuzzany what a journey what an adventure what beautiful images of sceenary what magical 3D characters and as for the storyline well that's just poetry from a very gifted author
2/19/2015 c20 aynaarah
I already knew I would like this chapter before actually reading it.. how cool is that? ... why? because of the world you create, because there were people like flowers.. because the narrative voice goes quietly into the background and feels like a third-person..
..I recognize your effort..
..Thank you..
.. and I also thank ChildOfTheForestWhoisEverWodering for listening to your readers wishes and speaking to you again.. :)..
I already knew I would like this chapter before actually reading it.. how cool is that? ... why? because of the world you create, because there were people like flowers.. because the narrative voice goes quietly into the background and feels like a third-person..
..I recognize your effort..
..Thank you..
.. and I also thank ChildOfTheForestWhoisEverWodering for listening to your readers wishes and speaking to you again.. :)..
2/9/2015 c18 Mark owens
Very actioned packed with serious moments and humorous moments Zuzanny writings for this chapter was extremely entaining just like all zuzzany's wonderful works
Very actioned packed with serious moments and humorous moments Zuzanny writings for this chapter was extremely entaining just like all zuzzany's wonderful works
1/28/2015 c17 Mark Owens
OMG wow from the Exquisite discribed Scenery through out this chapter to the cliff hanging ending zuzzany I'm on my knees in awe your outstanding
OMG wow from the Exquisite discribed Scenery through out this chapter to the cliff hanging ending zuzzany I'm on my knees in awe your outstanding
1/16/2015 c16 Mark Owens
Zuzzany's creativity and style of wrighting is so just standout its like this author is going to be the next big thing
Zuzzany's creativity and style of wrighting is so just standout its like this author is going to be the next big thing
1/16/2015 c15 Mark owens
The detailed descriptions of the characters and their surroundings takes my breath away zuzzany
The detailed descriptions of the characters and their surroundings takes my breath away zuzzany
1/16/2015 c14 Mark owens
Zuzzany's ability to have such wonderful interaction between her characters is almost being in on the conversation in person this author is a star going places
Zuzzany's ability to have such wonderful interaction between her characters is almost being in on the conversation in person this author is a star going places
1/14/2015 c13 Mark Owens
Finest hour finest work from this brave talented an uplifting author Zuzanny reading such beautiful art is worth more than all the world's gold brave groundbreaking and just a privilege to read this masterpiece
Finest hour finest work from this brave talented an uplifting author Zuzanny reading such beautiful art is worth more than all the world's gold brave groundbreaking and just a privilege to read this masterpiece