for Hell on Earth8/7/2005 c1 
1a moth in lace
Oh, I like this. It could have been written a tiny bit better (a beta reader would help), but the message and emotion came through very well.
-marie
1a moth in laceOh, I like this. It could have been written a tiny bit better (a beta reader would help), but the message and emotion came through very well.
-marie
8/5/2005 c1 64Tatsu the Blade Star
Wah, dark and scary. Don't smoke, kids! And suicide is bad too. And stay away from soul sucking black holes in eternity too. All good things to avoid.
Lol, nice job. Why am I laughting at a dark poem like this, you ask? Because It is 2:00 in the morning here and I have lost all sense of fear and sensability! Lets hear it for sleep depravation!
64Tatsu the Blade StarWah, dark and scary. Don't smoke, kids! And suicide is bad too. And stay away from soul sucking black holes in eternity too. All good things to avoid.
Lol, nice job. Why am I laughting at a dark poem like this, you ask? Because It is 2:00 in the morning here and I have lost all sense of fear and sensability! Lets hear it for sleep depravation!
4/6/2005 c1 24MaskedMarionette
wow... this hit home, especially that last part. v. dark... and I love it!
24MaskedMarionettewow... this hit home, especially that last part. v. dark... and I love it!
3/25/2005 c1 25Munchin
I like it alot. This is great.. i like your stories.. they are surprising.. Thanks.. please write more..
25MunchinI like it alot. This is great.. i like your stories.. they are surprising.. Thanks.. please write more..
3/24/2005 c1 79Sorrowful Dreams
a very interesting piece of work I'll admit. The flow and rhyming are really good though. Keep it up.
79Sorrowful Dreamsa very interesting piece of work I'll admit. The flow and rhyming are really good though. Keep it up.
3/24/2005 c1 14method acting
wow...wonderfuly writen. dark, deep. :-) it actualy rymed! That doesnt happen often, and it actulay worked for your peice. (it flows very well) nicely done. :-) thanks for the reveiws! :-)
14method actingwow...wonderfuly writen. dark, deep. :-) it actualy rymed! That doesnt happen often, and it actulay worked for your peice. (it flows very well) nicely done. :-) thanks for the reveiws! :-)
12/30/2004 c1 22Dying Without Gackt
I liked the end the most - but I loved how you started it out to. Nice imagery, and descriptions and I liked how things (her physical appearance) was imperfect. Thanks for your review as well.
22Dying Without GacktI liked the end the most - but I loved how you started it out to. Nice imagery, and descriptions and I liked how things (her physical appearance) was imperfect. Thanks for your review as well.
12/30/2004 c1 Anime Freakizoid
it was kind of disturbing and sad, but i still liked the ending and details...hope your holidays have been well! hope to hear from you soon, can't wait to read more poetry from you!-anime freakizoid X^_^X
it was kind of disturbing and sad, but i still liked the ending and details...hope your holidays have been well! hope to hear from you soon, can't wait to read more poetry from you!-anime freakizoid X^_^X