for Me, You, and Who4/3/2005 c1 
148Thyrt
wow..this hit a soft spot for me..i feel this way..and sometimes i don't even realize it..but the feeling is always there...great job!
148Thyrtwow..this hit a soft spot for me..i feel this way..and sometimes i don't even realize it..but the feeling is always there...great job!
3/27/2005 c1 Vince
sounds...subliminal...i think ^^;;
sounds...subliminal...i think ^^;;
3/18/2005 c1 artemisathene
Hey, thanks for the review. :)
I like this... especially "I trick myself/ into being hung by a silver chain"... very unique imagery.
Hey, thanks for the review. :)
I like this... especially "I trick myself/ into being hung by a silver chain"... very unique imagery.
1/18/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
This is really tpuching and just a powerful poem. Well done !
~* Noelle *~
90poetic abortionThis is really tpuching and just a powerful poem. Well done !
~* Noelle *~
12/31/2004 c1 243Manuel Fajar
If fate had both spun,
Entwined—plunged, then current swum,
¿Would life have begun? —m—
243Manuel FajarIf fate had both spun,
Entwined—plunged, then current swum,
¿Would life have begun? —m—