9/6/2005 c1 Good ol' Scarecrow
Thanks for your review. Original ideas coming - just watch out for them. 'Batman' was the major inspiration for the adventure - obviously.
Thanks for your review. Original ideas coming - just watch out for them. 'Batman' was the major inspiration for the adventure - obviously.
1/25/2005 c4 12SkyeWolf25
Loved this chapter as well, though I despised the cliffe at the end. You would do that, wouldn't you? *sigh* Guess I'll find out later on. Update soon or I shall be severly angry! Not really, but anyway, please really do update soon, the cliffee was murder and to say I am not having a extreme case of suspense would be a understatement, so please, be nice.
Loved this chapter as well, though I despised the cliffe at the end. You would do that, wouldn't you? *sigh* Guess I'll find out later on. Update soon or I shall be severly angry! Not really, but anyway, please really do update soon, the cliffee was murder and to say I am not having a extreme case of suspense would be a understatement, so please, be nice.
1/25/2005 c3 SkyeWolf25
Yes, you continued on with it! Great chapter and I am glad to see that you decided to go forward with this story! The plot thickens and I am curious as to where all this leads...so onto chapter four!
Yes, you continued on with it! Great chapter and I am glad to see that you decided to go forward with this story! The plot thickens and I am curious as to where all this leads...so onto chapter four!
1/25/2005 c3 SkyeWolf25
Yes, you continued on with it! Great chapter and I am glad to see that you decided to go forward with this story! The plot thickens and I am curious as to where all this leads...so onto chapter four!
Yes, you continued on with it! Great chapter and I am glad to see that you decided to go forward with this story! The plot thickens and I am curious as to where all this leads...so onto chapter four!
1/18/2005 c4 Keaira
kk...i guess this could be the end. good chapter!
kk...i guess this could be the end. good chapter!
1/5/2005 c3 Keaira
whee...it snowed again! anyways..now that i kno the rebels r good...i hope they win! good chapter! hope the plan will work and that jung will get his revenge : )
whee...it snowed again! anyways..now that i kno the rebels r good...i hope they win! good chapter! hope the plan will work and that jung will get his revenge : )
1/2/2005 c2 Iceunia
im confused...who's good and who's bad? it seems like all the rebels are dying...does that mean they're good or bad? maybe i'll get it wen the next chapters up or something...
im confused...who's good and who's bad? it seems like all the rebels are dying...does that mean they're good or bad? maybe i'll get it wen the next chapters up or something...
1/1/2005 c2 SkyeWolf25
Hm...I hope you continue this. This is very interesting, I could see how it can work as a short story, but as something longer, it could truly be great. Please tell me you are going to continue this story.
Hm...I hope you continue this. This is very interesting, I could see how it can work as a short story, but as something longer, it could truly be great. Please tell me you are going to continue this story.
12/31/2004 c1 Iceunia
yes! asian invasion! MUAHAAHAA...asians will rule the world. eh...srry! anyways...good prologue thingy. at the moment it doesnt seem like it would work as a short story but that could just be me. so, put first chapter up soon
~Iceunia
yes! asian invasion! MUAHAAHAA...asians will rule the world. eh...srry! anyways...good prologue thingy. at the moment it doesnt seem like it would work as a short story but that could just be me. so, put first chapter up soon
~Iceunia