for The Disaster of Poreo Bay4/9/2005 c1 
194Aslan Israel
hm. Too much backstory, too much information. It drags you real meaning down and dilutes the emotion you're trying to potray. Not you best, but still not bad. I pray those whose lost their lives in that disaster are in a better place now...
194Aslan Israelhm. Too much backstory, too much information. It drags you real meaning down and dilutes the emotion you're trying to potray. Not you best, but still not bad. I pray those whose lost their lives in that disaster are in a better place now...
4/6/2005 c1 70this is britt
That was incredible. A devastating thing, an emotionally screaming poem- incredible.
70this is brittThat was incredible. A devastating thing, an emotionally screaming poem- incredible.
1/1/2005 c1 57logical-unreason
Chillingly beautiful, I lost a friend in the tsunami too, Godless and senseless destruction.
57logical-unreasonChillingly beautiful, I lost a friend in the tsunami too, Godless and senseless destruction.