for A Dark Obsession2/19/2005 c9 
4PassionObsession
So I definitely meant to review last chapter and then had something come up and I completly forgot- terribly sorry about that, last chapter rocked and I'm sorry I didn't get a chance to review.
Anyway, about this oh-so-lovely chapter- I think it's so amazing how Anna is able to win over just about every guy. She has Rook wrapped around her little finger, Bishop just got into a fight over her, and Derek stayed with her even when he found out who she was with! Even King is obsessed with her, even if he is an asshole. God, I can't WAIT until Render appears! And hopefully that'll be next chapter, since I think that's the only one who could've stopped the fight so easily! And King is supposed to be in Philly, so it shouldn't be him, and somehow I don't think Alex would've gotten by the bouncers at the front door! Ah, I can't wait to find out! Your story is really something else, and it just gets better every chapter! Update soon!
4PassionObsessionSo I definitely meant to review last chapter and then had something come up and I completly forgot- terribly sorry about that, last chapter rocked and I'm sorry I didn't get a chance to review.
Anyway, about this oh-so-lovely chapter- I think it's so amazing how Anna is able to win over just about every guy. She has Rook wrapped around her little finger, Bishop just got into a fight over her, and Derek stayed with her even when he found out who she was with! Even King is obsessed with her, even if he is an asshole. God, I can't WAIT until Render appears! And hopefully that'll be next chapter, since I think that's the only one who could've stopped the fight so easily! And King is supposed to be in Philly, so it shouldn't be him, and somehow I don't think Alex would've gotten by the bouncers at the front door! Ah, I can't wait to find out! Your story is really something else, and it just gets better every chapter! Update soon!
2/19/2005 c9 ellabella
mad chapter. very revealing. so he deserves to get his neck broken for calling her a whore because derek and bishop like her or because she wears 'the ring'? i think it's the former. nice chapter, can't wait until the next, for some reason i just want more and more, your chapters are too short for me. as far as gothic authors are going i have to say you and give me the gun are neck and neck. i guess it depends on how each stories ends. you're really good, if you know of any other goth related stories i could read that are good then please do tell. i've read a few small ones that don't even measure up (so you can image i was very happy when i found yours), i'm so happy you update as much as you do. cya next chapter
ellabella
mad chapter. very revealing. so he deserves to get his neck broken for calling her a whore because derek and bishop like her or because she wears 'the ring'? i think it's the former. nice chapter, can't wait until the next, for some reason i just want more and more, your chapters are too short for me. as far as gothic authors are going i have to say you and give me the gun are neck and neck. i guess it depends on how each stories ends. you're really good, if you know of any other goth related stories i could read that are good then please do tell. i've read a few small ones that don't even measure up (so you can image i was very happy when i found yours), i'm so happy you update as much as you do. cya next chapter
ellabella
2/19/2005 c9 14ChasingSublime
O.O...that's cruel. Cliffhangers are cruel. You have to update soon. Or I will go mental. *huggles Render and mutters to herself* please let it be Render next chapter, please please please. I will be enternally gratefull to Your Lovliness if it is.~Rach
14ChasingSublimeO.O...that's cruel. Cliffhangers are cruel. You have to update soon. Or I will go mental. *huggles Render and mutters to herself* please let it be Render next chapter, please please please. I will be enternally gratefull to Your Lovliness if it is.~Rach
2/19/2005 c8 2kira12233
OMG! I'm a goth, but i don't take drugs! and most of my other friends don't either! well... maybe one or two... BUT STILL! anyway great story i hope you don't mess up describing the club... I trust that you won't
2kira12233OMG! I'm a goth, but i don't take drugs! and most of my other friends don't either! well... maybe one or two... BUT STILL! anyway great story i hope you don't mess up describing the club... I trust that you won't
2/16/2005 c8 CTRL
YAY! CONAN!
*cheers*
this story and chapter was AWESOME.
LUB IT TO PIECES!
Adieu
Sydney the Psycho
YAY! CONAN!
*cheers*
this story and chapter was AWESOME.
LUB IT TO PIECES!
Adieu
Sydney the Psycho
2/16/2005 c7 CTRL
meh, ok i KNOW im late in reviewing.
*pouts*
i lost this story then had to find it.
RENDER HAS A CLUB!
col.
And..MAYBE, just MAYBE, we'll see Render in the next chappie, right?
*looks hopeful*
I SHALL JUST HAVE TO READ THE NEXT CHAPPIE TO FIND OUT!
ADiEu!
meh, ok i KNOW im late in reviewing.
*pouts*
i lost this story then had to find it.
RENDER HAS A CLUB!
col.
And..MAYBE, just MAYBE, we'll see Render in the next chappie, right?
*looks hopeful*
I SHALL JUST HAVE TO READ THE NEXT CHAPPIE TO FIND OUT!
ADiEu!
2/15/2005 c8 2cbprice25
(LotR *is* better.) Ah! I honestly don't understand how I miss my favorite stories being updated-doesn't make any sense, like her math problem. Bishop seems really nice. I mean, compare it to him treating her like everyone else and the time he almost broke down... I'm looking forward to more insights into his character. Update soon!
2cbprice25(LotR *is* better.) Ah! I honestly don't understand how I miss my favorite stories being updated-doesn't make any sense, like her math problem. Bishop seems really nice. I mean, compare it to him treating her like everyone else and the time he almost broke down... I'm looking forward to more insights into his character. Update soon!
2/14/2005 c8 232Second Hand Screams
Oh! I forgot that you do the whole rresponse thing to reviews, so seeing my name up there on the page rocked! Seriously, this story still rocks, and I liked the whole siblings using eachother's middle names. Nice touch. I loved the "impulse control" line, too. You have an awesome sense of humor. You were right, the chapter is "Okayish," as you put it, but I totally relate to the homework and social life problem. Why do you think I only post poems? No time for stories! :) But yeah, maybe you should give your oh-so-creative brain a break and watch Jungle Book or something. You sound like you could use a rest. It's turning formulaic a bit, w/ the descriptions (I know, cuz I do the same thing!). The dialogues are great, but the rest sounds tired. Go watch Disney for a day, then get back to it! Good luck! And post more. This story still rocks!
232Second Hand ScreamsOh! I forgot that you do the whole rresponse thing to reviews, so seeing my name up there on the page rocked! Seriously, this story still rocks, and I liked the whole siblings using eachother's middle names. Nice touch. I loved the "impulse control" line, too. You have an awesome sense of humor. You were right, the chapter is "Okayish," as you put it, but I totally relate to the homework and social life problem. Why do you think I only post poems? No time for stories! :) But yeah, maybe you should give your oh-so-creative brain a break and watch Jungle Book or something. You sound like you could use a rest. It's turning formulaic a bit, w/ the descriptions (I know, cuz I do the same thing!). The dialogues are great, but the rest sounds tired. Go watch Disney for a day, then get back to it! Good luck! And post more. This story still rocks!
2/13/2005 c8 a fan
omg! i finally re-found ur story! i read so much that i couldnt find urs! but now, i have written ur name down like, all over so i dont lose it again! i luv ur story a lot, and cant wait to see wait happens next!
omg! i finally re-found ur story! i read so much that i couldnt find urs! but now, i have written ur name down like, all over so i dont lose it again! i luv ur story a lot, and cant wait to see wait happens next!
2/13/2005 c8 14ChasingSublime
^_^ No problem, I'm in love with your story. I got so ecited to see a new chapter. I was on the phone with my boyfriend and I started squealing and fell out of my chair and he was like "wtf?" Does this mean Render next chapter? I really hope so. *huggles Render* Update soon please.~Rach
14ChasingSublime^_^ No problem, I'm in love with your story. I got so ecited to see a new chapter. I was on the phone with my boyfriend and I started squealing and fell out of my chair and he was like "wtf?" Does this mean Render next chapter? I really hope so. *huggles Render* Update soon please.~Rach
2/13/2005 c8 bleh
yay! you updated! i promise to get you the candy after the valentine day rush. *mutters* stupid holiday left me broke... *cough* any ways, you gonna give us hints? awesomeness. on other news, math is evil. its part of a satanistic plot to ruin social and home lives. spread the message.
yay! you updated! i promise to get you the candy after the valentine day rush. *mutters* stupid holiday left me broke... *cough* any ways, you gonna give us hints? awesomeness. on other news, math is evil. its part of a satanistic plot to ruin social and home lives. spread the message.
2/13/2005 c8 xinder
NO~ XO You cannot leave me here~!
TT_TT Have mercy on me~!
XD This is such a great story~! I love it~! Please update soon~!
I love Render. =D
NO~ XO You cannot leave me here~!
TT_TT Have mercy on me~!
XD This is such a great story~! I love it~! Please update soon~!
I love Render. =D
2/13/2005 c8 WildGoddess
Great chapter! I love you're story, that's why you can't get rid of me. Just because I'm curious, do you have friends that are goths? I know a couple and they act like this, which is why I'm asking. You do a good job portraying them. It kind of sucks that your chapter was so short. But that keeps your reviewers wanting more! Anyways update soon, we're all waiting.
Great chapter! I love you're story, that's why you can't get rid of me. Just because I'm curious, do you have friends that are goths? I know a couple and they act like this, which is why I'm asking. You do a good job portraying them. It kind of sucks that your chapter was so short. But that keeps your reviewers wanting more! Anyways update soon, we're all waiting.
2/13/2005 c8 BhenBa
Hehe... I gotta say i really like this story.. there's this liveliness to it.. yah... hm *bounces* fun...pure F-U-N! yeh I don't tend to make much sense... get yer ass back to work...and hury! :P
Hehe... I gotta say i really like this story.. there's this liveliness to it.. yah... hm *bounces* fun...pure F-U-N! yeh I don't tend to make much sense... get yer ass back to work...and hury! :P