for A Dark Obsession2/2/2005 c7 Infamous K
Marvelous! Simply...magnifique! -laughs-
Great story. I'm in an odd mind-set right now, though. Render x "Mitchell", maybe? XD Nah, just joking. But what's Miss Mitchell's first name? I can't find it, and I've looked through each chapter, so...
-Infamous K
Marvelous! Simply...magnifique! -laughs-
Great story. I'm in an odd mind-set right now, though. Render x "Mitchell", maybe? XD Nah, just joking. But what's Miss Mitchell's first name? I can't find it, and I've looked through each chapter, so...
-Infamous K
2/2/2005 c7 
14ChasingSublime
YES YES YES YES! New chapter! *dances around in excitment* this one was awesome. And yea, you should definetly have Anna go to Render's club in the next chap.~Rach
14ChasingSublimeYES YES YES YES! New chapter! *dances around in excitment* this one was awesome. And yea, you should definetly have Anna go to Render's club in the next chap.~Rach
2/1/2005 c7 4PassionObsession
Must. Update. Now. AHH! This is too good! Must have more! Render rules! Please update, and soon!
4PassionObsessionMust. Update. Now. AHH! This is too good! Must have more! Render rules! Please update, and soon!
2/1/2005 c7 JT FAN
Great chap.I can relate to what Rook was saying. I wish i had the guts to rebel against my parents and get a tattoo and another piercing.My dad would freak ! Rook seems cool.Will Anna be going to the Asylum any time soon ? What about the piercing ? Glad you updated and i cant wait to read chappie 8.
Great chap.I can relate to what Rook was saying. I wish i had the guts to rebel against my parents and get a tattoo and another piercing.My dad would freak ! Rook seems cool.Will Anna be going to the Asylum any time soon ? What about the piercing ? Glad you updated and i cant wait to read chappie 8.
2/1/2005 c7 sparklingteardrops
I don't know what to say, except: I loved the chap. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapters.
I don't know what to say, except: I loved the chap. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapters.
1/31/2005 c6 Hells Tenshi
This chapter is great! Your going to tell us why Bishop was acting like that soon, right? Anyway, update a.s.a.p!
This chapter is great! Your going to tell us why Bishop was acting like that soon, right? Anyway, update a.s.a.p!
1/26/2005 c1 JT FAN
please update very very soon.
please update very very soon.
1/22/2005 c6 1SaladeMickson
Aww, Bishop and Anna were so cute ^^;;I wonder what's going to happen with Bishop and Render..and Anna's in big trouble,too eek
1SaladeMicksonAww, Bishop and Anna were so cute ^^;;I wonder what's going to happen with Bishop and Render..and Anna's in big trouble,too eek
1/20/2005 c6 krirobe
I love your story! It's wonderful! How they're all named after chess pieces, brilliant! I hope Render isn't going to be a slimeball because I thought that the romance was going to be between them so I'm sort of attached. Although a relationship between a teenager and a man in his mid to late twenties is a bit perverse, but I love reading about stuff like that (for some odd reason). Not perverted, just perverse. Anyway, update soon! And I love 'The Hot One'! haha
I love your story! It's wonderful! How they're all named after chess pieces, brilliant! I hope Render isn't going to be a slimeball because I thought that the romance was going to be between them so I'm sort of attached. Although a relationship between a teenager and a man in his mid to late twenties is a bit perverse, but I love reading about stuff like that (for some odd reason). Not perverted, just perverse. Anyway, update soon! And I love 'The Hot One'! haha
1/20/2005 c6 WildGoddess
Awesome chapter. Bishop seems really nice. The whole Render mystery is very intriguing. I hope you update soon and it better be a long chapter. Oh and do you know how your story will end? By the way, nice rhyme (:
Awesome chapter. Bishop seems really nice. The whole Render mystery is very intriguing. I hope you update soon and it better be a long chapter. Oh and do you know how your story will end? By the way, nice rhyme (:
1/20/2005 c6 shauna
wow...i have to say that this is definitely one of my favourite stories on here. it just seems so...real, i guess. haha, i LOVE it! it's really interesting and to think you've only written it in 18 days-WOW! i really like your characters and am SO intrigued to see what the hell is up with render! post soon!
wow...i have to say that this is definitely one of my favourite stories on here. it just seems so...real, i guess. haha, i LOVE it! it's really interesting and to think you've only written it in 18 days-WOW! i really like your characters and am SO intrigued to see what the hell is up with render! post soon!
1/19/2005 c6 2cbprice25
Great chapter! Alien Bob will have to find new buddies to hang out with-this story's only getting better. And I'm no psychic, I just speculate WAY too much-what's Bishop's connection to Render? Brother? Dad? Guy who stole his favorite toy? Some obsession like Anna has with Bishop? (I've actually got some possibilities involving aliens and apple cores now) And who the heck was that at the end of the chapter? Friend, mother, friend's mother?
Okay, enough with the speculation. Just update soon!
2cbprice25Great chapter! Alien Bob will have to find new buddies to hang out with-this story's only getting better. And I'm no psychic, I just speculate WAY too much-what's Bishop's connection to Render? Brother? Dad? Guy who stole his favorite toy? Some obsession like Anna has with Bishop? (I've actually got some possibilities involving aliens and apple cores now) And who the heck was that at the end of the chapter? Friend, mother, friend's mother?
Okay, enough with the speculation. Just update soon!
1/19/2005 c6 Chookstar
Haha that girl is so obssessed its hilarious! Bishop = HOTTIE! I love the fact Queen told everyone its really quite funny, how gutting would that be. And the plot thickens with all the Render/bishop stuff keep it up and get better!
Haha that girl is so obssessed its hilarious! Bishop = HOTTIE! I love the fact Queen told everyone its really quite funny, how gutting would that be. And the plot thickens with all the Render/bishop stuff keep it up and get better!