
1/8/2005 c4
1Star Studded Diamond
This story is awesome. Goth guys are so effing hot *sigh*...Anyways...I want Render to come back, really bad..for some reason. Anyways, great job on the story so far. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

This story is awesome. Goth guys are so effing hot *sigh*...Anyways...I want Render to come back, really bad..for some reason. Anyways, great job on the story so far. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
1/8/2005 c1
10Chelwad
I just found this and I'm positively obsessed with it already.. 4 chapters is just too short! Update soon!

I just found this and I'm positively obsessed with it already.. 4 chapters is just too short! Update soon!
1/8/2005 c4 winter
gah! such a cliff hanger.
king sort of freaks me out, but ah bishop. there is nothing like a really smart rebel. and a MOTORCYCLE. they are so, so cool. come back, render and bishop! save her!
update soon!
gah! such a cliff hanger.
king sort of freaks me out, but ah bishop. there is nothing like a really smart rebel. and a MOTORCYCLE. they are so, so cool. come back, render and bishop! save her!
update soon!
1/8/2005 c4 C.M
Great story so far. I can't wait for more.
It's kind of weird, I myself have my own blue-haired 'goth' guy and my last name is Mitchell. *sigh*
Write more soon!
Great story so far. I can't wait for more.
It's kind of weird, I myself have my own blue-haired 'goth' guy and my last name is Mitchell. *sigh*
Write more soon!
1/8/2005 c4 Sydney
Conan! Is he gonna be in this story a lot? Hope he is. He seems like he might be pretty cool. Ya, well i have a question:
How old is Render?
Can you tell? Bc i really wanna know. lol
well you must update!
Great chap, btw!
Conan! Is he gonna be in this story a lot? Hope he is. He seems like he might be pretty cool. Ya, well i have a question:
How old is Render?
Can you tell? Bc i really wanna know. lol
well you must update!
Great chap, btw!
1/8/2005 c4 WildGoddess
You know what I think? I think that was a HORRIBLE hint. But I am willing to forgive you because I like this chapter. No wait...I'm still mad. But not even that will stop me from giving my opinion. I like Render and King. I like Bishop too. Right now though, I think Anna should end up with King or Render. Although I could change my mind later. For certain though, all of them seem sexy. Anyways, since I am still upset I refuse to say update soon or great chapter. Bye.
You know what I think? I think that was a HORRIBLE hint. But I am willing to forgive you because I like this chapter. No wait...I'm still mad. But not even that will stop me from giving my opinion. I like Render and King. I like Bishop too. Right now though, I think Anna should end up with King or Render. Although I could change my mind later. For certain though, all of them seem sexy. Anyways, since I am still upset I refuse to say update soon or great chapter. Bye.
1/8/2005 c4
132lucretiabaine
My mom won't let me dye my hair blue, either. I did used to have some temporary stuff, but I spilled it all over the carpet and now I'm to allowed to use that either. Hehe. I'm totally loving this story. In fact, it's going on my favorites. ^_^ Yay.

My mom won't let me dye my hair blue, either. I did used to have some temporary stuff, but I spilled it all over the carpet and now I'm to allowed to use that either. Hehe. I'm totally loving this story. In fact, it's going on my favorites. ^_^ Yay.
1/8/2005 c3
21Celtic-Princess344
I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can!

I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can!
1/6/2005 c3
132lucretiabaine
Wow, this is interesting. Yes, these Goths are "different." It's kind of funny actually. And blue hair is awesome.

Wow, this is interesting. Yes, these Goths are "different." It's kind of funny actually. And blue hair is awesome.
1/5/2005 c3 r.p
dude ur story's awsome!It's real original. Bishop seems to be fadeing... but he's sorta boreing anyway...
dude ur story's awsome!It's real original. Bishop seems to be fadeing... but he's sorta boreing anyway...
1/5/2005 c3
11falls4guys
yea! u updated. u've made me happy. i have one complaint thou...longer chappies.

yea! u updated. u've made me happy. i have one complaint thou...longer chappies.
1/5/2005 c2
14ChasingSublime
Haha, sorry I'm reviewing this chapter but i reviewed 3 yesterday and i can't do it twice, but i had to tell you that I had this really messed up dream last night, that I had Render's ring and I lived out everything Anna has done in the story so far. It was crazy. I think I think about your story too often.~Rachel

Haha, sorry I'm reviewing this chapter but i reviewed 3 yesterday and i can't do it twice, but i had to tell you that I had this really messed up dream last night, that I had Render's ring and I lived out everything Anna has done in the story so far. It was crazy. I think I think about your story too often.~Rachel
1/5/2005 c3 winter
hey - i love your story!
i'm really beginning to like Anna - and Queen and Jessie seem really cool. Ah! and Bishop... and and Render! (is he coming back? please?)
nice work! update update update!
hey - i love your story!
i'm really beginning to like Anna - and Queen and Jessie seem really cool. Ah! and Bishop... and and Render! (is he coming back? please?)
nice work! update update update!