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1/6/2005 c1 inchoate
hahaha! this is completely hilarious! it took you ONE commerce lesson to do this? whoa..was your teacher mr hagen? O_oanyway, you better mention me at teh bottom! danke!and aLice, i isht gona miss you, YOU TRAITOR! how could you! james ruse indeed! im ok...hehehewell, post more of the story soon, cant wait to read it!
1/4/2005 c1 hiruni
alice I think you might need you're blind.. you've put the wrong parts for people, and you've mixed them up.. im pretty damn sure you wrote the part baout the "philiposis centre" not bobbie.. also with harshils, some of the stuff isnt even what she wrote. I really think you need to fix this up
1/4/2005 c1 ROAR
ALICE YOU IDIOT! you mixed our parts up...i so did not say : All of a sudden, Mark Philippoussis turned into Nemo, and fell to the floor, gasping “Water! I need water!”“What the fuck! You’re…you’re…you’re alive!” Ara screamed, going red.“I’ll explain…later…find…water!”So, as fast as she could, she ran to the river, and dropped him in.“I said water! Not sewerage! You fool!”And again, she picked him up and threw him into the ocean nearby.“Ahh,” he breathed, “that’s better. Now I’ll tell you. I’m a fish.”“And…? I don’t get what you’re saying.”
1/4/2005 c1 hiruni
argh! lice you editted it and got rid of the good parts!
1/4/2005 c1 3DarknessDancer
:grr: -stabs alice- I want the 2nd chapter damnit and hiruni is So not great
1/4/2005 c1 hiruni
I can't remember what happens but I thought bobbies ending of how the girl jumps into the river and dies after about 2 paragraphs was a good idea.. the part I wrote at the beginning was meant to go at the END.. after people had read the story (alice!), that way they'd understand what I was talking about.. and read.. it's actually good, some of the things are really random, but if you have half a brain, they will actually make sense.. R&R- hiruni

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