for A Couple's Resolution5/8/2005 c1 
90poetic abortion
The ending was really well done and fit this really well. It reminded me of my parent's divorce though I don't think that is what you were trying to say through this. (Though I could be wrong, I am often.) I still loved this, the poem was well put and clearly written by a poet with much experience. ^-^ I'm surpirsed this has not been reviewed! Its such a beautiful piece too. :( ^_^ Well now it is! XD Continue the good work!
!~* Noelle *~!
90poetic abortionThe ending was really well done and fit this really well. It reminded me of my parent's divorce though I don't think that is what you were trying to say through this. (Though I could be wrong, I am often.) I still loved this, the poem was well put and clearly written by a poet with much experience. ^-^ I'm surpirsed this has not been reviewed! Its such a beautiful piece too. :( ^_^ Well now it is! XD Continue the good work!
!~* Noelle *~!