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6/29/2005 c1 tanuki
you have compassion and love for the weak. do something with it. i would reccomend you to medical school or something. take this good energy and go for it! find the compassionate future that you can pave! you're heading the right way to help people and do great things with your life while you still have time and youth. don't waste it.

tantan
5/31/2005 c1 10Cemetary Gates
I like this. Good imagery.

It feels disconnected, though. More abstract than with substance. Work on the connection of abstract with concrete.

Or mebbe... I'm not reading any metaphors because its 11 PM. M tired.

Otherwise, keep writing.
1/17/2001 c1 I-Wish-I-Was-Called-Flora
Oh I LOVE it! I LOVE IT! That's really sad, somehow. Did I mention I loved it?
1/17/2001 c1 142Battykat
beautiful. truly moving.

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