1/9/2005 c1 191nine iron
Thankyou for your very long and deep review, yes I do think poems shou;d contain soul. I unfortunatuly have had less and less time to write recently and this is reflected in my work, in both the lessening strenght but in how they express my current status, I do feel less as I am working so hard away from my poems. I hope you enjoy my new pieces as I have been on holiday and have had much more time to think and have had much more to put into the works. I feel my best are in the middle as I had started to perfect my style but had the time, any beyond Oct 2004 really were at a time when I was pushed for a moment to relax.

Thankyou very much and soon I will read your works, I have a few new ones to post tonight!

nine iron.

PS This is a strong work, you utilise the layout much more than I do but also in a different way, I do focus not just on words but on how they flow and they layout to give structure and have a point of their own to make!

Keep writing and good luck

Nine Iron