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1/10/2005 c1 24katmonkey
Wow, this is amazing. I like how stuff is screamed then the next bit is whispered. Very effective. I could imagine it as a song.
1/6/2005 c1 Rara Punk
Great, I can really imagine this song. I liked these lines the best "talk of insides and taking looks over personalitydid you pretend or were you just blind to me,and how I felt about you?" - just sums up the feelings and the story too. Awesome work, write on!
1/4/2005 c1 Angelic Hellraiser
Dude, this is awesome! The emotion is raw and heart-wrenching. I love it! and thanx for the review! I look forward to read more from you.

oh, by the way... love your penname!
1/4/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
woah, this is awesome! i like how it flows and captures the feelings just perfectly. as well, i like your sign in name, afi lyrics... at least thats where i see them coming from, i could be wrong :P but yeah.

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