for Crystal Drops7/21/2006 c1 
11midnight dreams
Awh. ;_;I liked this much. The imagery, as the crystal drops fell on the snow was beautiful. =)It's a new image for me. Thank you for sharing this. ^_^
11midnight dreamsAwh. ;_;I liked this much. The imagery, as the crystal drops fell on the snow was beautiful. =)It's a new image for me. Thank you for sharing this. ^_^
10/12/2005 c1 64atalantea
Very detailed. I could see the scene clearly. The rhythm is kind of off but i guess that's your style. I love the words you chose and how they are arranged. Nice. :D
64atalanteaVery detailed. I could see the scene clearly. The rhythm is kind of off but i guess that's your style. I love the words you chose and how they are arranged. Nice. :D
10/3/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
Lovely~ the imagery captured me right from the start~ awesome work
keep writing!
132mizu no kokoroLovely~ the imagery captured me right from the start~ awesome work
keep writing!
9/29/2005 c1 23Shalafi
Wow... the descriptive words are just... completely and utterly awesome. The metaphors added so much to the imaginative part of the poem. It started to get colder and darker in the room while I was reading the poem. Very Very Good Work! Keep it up. Thanks for the review, as well.
Shalafi
23ShalafiWow... the descriptive words are just... completely and utterly awesome. The metaphors added so much to the imaginative part of the poem. It started to get colder and darker in the room while I was reading the poem. Very Very Good Work! Keep it up. Thanks for the review, as well.
Shalafi
9/21/2005 c1 206Night Skye Tears
omg you paint such a GORGEOUS picture! the feeling of the coldness and night is just awesome. beautiful poem! i'm adding it to my faves.
and thanks for commenting on mine ;)
206Night Skye Tearsomg you paint such a GORGEOUS picture! the feeling of the coldness and night is just awesome. beautiful poem! i'm adding it to my faves.
and thanks for commenting on mine ;)
1/16/2005 c1 9Happy-Platipus
This is so pretty!I love the line 'For the drops of hope will reveal the path.'I really love the meaning!
9Happy-PlatipusThis is so pretty!I love the line 'For the drops of hope will reveal the path.'I really love the meaning!