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11MonarchsCrywow! Great stuff, really interesting, and WOW! ^_^ good work
1/4/2005 c1 126swift sky silvernice imagery, and great use of vocabulary in such a short poem. =0)
1/4/2005 c1 14i am classicoo haikus are fun. i like this one. It's done well. Unlike some.
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