for The Scourge11/22/2005 c1 
2Talis
A very good and descriptive piece of writing. I would be quite interested to see how you can build on this and evolve it further. Are you up to that challenge?
2TalisA very good and descriptive piece of writing. I would be quite interested to see how you can build on this and evolve it further. Are you up to that challenge?
4/20/2005 c1 7gingerbeer
Very realistic. I especially liked "New Nova Scotia," because your weapon of "glory and extinction" is an echo of the 20th century's Cold War.
You should totally develop on this. It would be cool to "see" Dr. Alan's initial days at the UNOI if you diluted the narration at the beginning with some dialogue.
7gingerbeerVery realistic. I especially liked "New Nova Scotia," because your weapon of "glory and extinction" is an echo of the 20th century's Cold War.
You should totally develop on this. It would be cool to "see" Dr. Alan's initial days at the UNOI if you diluted the narration at the beginning with some dialogue.
3/24/2005 c1 156ShadowPharoh
you are a fucked up person. i'm sorry, just stating the truth. this isn't worth my time reading it. FYI: stay away from my stories and poems, and stay away from I-Luv-Mosquition!
SP
156ShadowPharohyou are a fucked up person. i'm sorry, just stating the truth. this isn't worth my time reading it. FYI: stay away from my stories and poems, and stay away from I-Luv-Mosquition!
SP