
1/8/2005 c1
4ckelley
I thought this poem was really good. I have some friends over seas in the war and I think this poem reaches out to any that has lost there lives.
Great work.
Cassie

I thought this poem was really good. I have some friends over seas in the war and I think this poem reaches out to any that has lost there lives.
Great work.
Cassie
1/5/2005 c1
41Jennifer Churchland
Very good job, Micah, beautiful, and tragic, please write more soon. ~jenny~

Very good job, Micah, beautiful, and tragic, please write more soon. ~jenny~
1/5/2005 c1 smeagol
wow, thats really good, in a very depressing way, intresting combonation, very, VERY good.
wow, thats really good, in a very depressing way, intresting combonation, very, VERY good.
1/5/2005 c1
25Chandra Chhaya
That was very touching and sad. It reminds me of some of the war movies I have watched. Quite a noble poem!
~InspiredxIllusions~
p.s. thanks for the review!

That was very touching and sad. It reminds me of some of the war movies I have watched. Quite a noble poem!
~InspiredxIllusions~
p.s. thanks for the review!
1/5/2005 c1
19writerbud85
Nice rhyme(dont know if thats spelled right). I really like this poem; it's very touching and patriotic. I dont remember if you said this was your first poem or not, but if it is, great start! Thanks for the read.~writerbud85

Nice rhyme(dont know if thats spelled right). I really like this poem; it's very touching and patriotic. I dont remember if you said this was your first poem or not, but if it is, great start! Thanks for the read.~writerbud85