for She Is Alone1/15/2006 c1 
7Gwynyth Liss Travis
... but she isn't only lying to herself, is she now? She's lying to others just the same... why else would they let her go? It's strong.
7Gwynyth Liss Travis... but she isn't only lying to herself, is she now? She's lying to others just the same... why else would they let her go? It's strong.
5/23/2005 c1 87youzi
I seem to have read something like this before, once, twice, a hundred times before. Ah, well...
87youziI seem to have read something like this before, once, twice, a hundred times before. Ah, well...
4/6/2005 c1 36Silentwriter9
oh wow. This was deep and meaningful. Loneliness is an awful feeling. I liked how you explain her feelings of being alone and not mentioning the word alone till the very end.
*Silent Wrier*
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36Silentwriter9oh wow. This was deep and meaningful. Loneliness is an awful feeling. I liked how you explain her feelings of being alone and not mentioning the word alone till the very end.
*Silent Wrier*
Thank you for your review on "Drawing Him In" Did you see the link to the picture that inspired it on my profile? Thanks again! =)
1/16/2005 c1 36contrast and friction
O... I LOVE this piece.It's so powerfulAnd you have a real gift with words =)
I need to get back into my writing - I havent done much lately.
Keep up the good good work xox
36contrast and frictionO... I LOVE this piece.It's so powerfulAnd you have a real gift with words =)
I need to get back into my writing - I havent done much lately.
Keep up the good good work xox
1/8/2005 c1 169Siberia82
Excellent introspection! I admire your skill with words. It kinda reminds me of one of my earliest pieces, called "The Stranger in Me", if you're curious.
169Siberia82Excellent introspection! I admire your skill with words. It kinda reminds me of one of my earliest pieces, called "The Stranger in Me", if you're curious.
1/6/2005 c1 298Moon-Chaser
I love the transformation, this poem is very powerful, I could feel the emotion coming out of the poem. Very beautiful. I love the perspective that you put this poem in.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserI love the transformation, this poem is very powerful, I could feel the emotion coming out of the poem. Very beautiful. I love the perspective that you put this poem in.
Keep it up.