for Song for Her1/11/2005 c1 
4thisspiltmilk
beautiful. i loved all of it. I especially liked "They tell me you are a chestnut and that you are tasteless and your face too red I care not to worry..." lovely.
4thisspiltmilkbeautiful. i loved all of it. I especially liked "They tell me you are a chestnut and that you are tasteless and your face too red I care not to worry..." lovely.
1/8/2005 c1 Ericalyn
Hey thanks for all the reviews, thought I would return the favor. This poem was well written. I loved the descriptions and imagery that you used. Just the way you said it made it all the more real. Good job, keep it up!
Hey thanks for all the reviews, thought I would return the favor. This poem was well written. I loved the descriptions and imagery that you used. Just the way you said it made it all the more real. Good job, keep it up!
1/6/2005 c1 4IsisAvenger
I love the imagery and that you used the word 'ember', that is such a pretty word and says so much.
4IsisAvengerI love the imagery and that you used the word 'ember', that is such a pretty word and says so much.