for Tales of the Realm: Screaming Mountains3/17/2005 c2 
14Alatariel313
hi! i'm back! MAHAHAH, never mind...anyway when are you going to update? update soon before i hurt you :-)
14Alatariel313hi! i'm back! MAHAHAH, never mind...anyway when are you going to update? update soon before i hurt you :-)
3/10/2005 c3 175The Random Witness
WOW! This is great, down to earth yet not from this earth..lol but yeah great work! i like the twist of an orc wanting to help, that shocked me. MORE! KEEP GOING! ~TRW
175The Random WitnessWOW! This is great, down to earth yet not from this earth..lol but yeah great work! i like the twist of an orc wanting to help, that shocked me. MORE! KEEP GOING! ~TRW
1/11/2005 c3 14Alatariel313
It's Lord of the ringsish! witch means i will love it forever! anyway these dwarfs seem..um.. i need a word...hormonal! yes bad word...maybe something else... well, i will tell you when i think of it,one day...anyway favorite thing: "It was big, red and trying to eat me." priceless!
14Alatariel313It's Lord of the ringsish! witch means i will love it forever! anyway these dwarfs seem..um.. i need a word...hormonal! yes bad word...maybe something else... well, i will tell you when i think of it,one day...anyway favorite thing: "It was big, red and trying to eat me." priceless!
1/8/2005 c3 1Marie K
I like the story, but I have a few questions. Why are they hunting the dragon? What's a halfling? What's up with the demon in the tree? Like I said, the story itself is good, but, it just starts with no explination at all. If you answer these questions soon, as in the next chapter or two, or maybe edit the begining to answer these questions, then your story with be great. Update soon! :)
1Marie KI like the story, but I have a few questions. Why are they hunting the dragon? What's a halfling? What's up with the demon in the tree? Like I said, the story itself is good, but, it just starts with no explination at all. If you answer these questions soon, as in the next chapter or two, or maybe edit the begining to answer these questions, then your story with be great. Update soon! :)