for Falling, Falling7/24/2005 c1 Marisa
No doubt a lovely poem, but there was something that I just couldn't put my finger on that didn't seem right. Hmm, oh well. Very nice, I definitely felt involved.
No doubt a lovely poem, but there was something that I just couldn't put my finger on that didn't seem right. Hmm, oh well. Very nice, I definitely felt involved.
4/2/2005 c1 ludicrous louie
i liked the last half, but it took a bit to really get the rythme. the first two stanza didn't really seem to fit in. i like it alot...loved the ending!
i liked the last half, but it took a bit to really get the rythme. the first two stanza didn't really seem to fit in. i like it alot...loved the ending!
3/31/2005 c1 
8A-wolf-called-Skya
i definitely liked this poem. very nice! i tried to write one on falling, but i changed it to "Scratching Post" and i'm still developing most of the rythym.
anyways, i really quite liked this one!^^
-Rachel.
*Every legend leaves a mark*
8A-wolf-called-Skyai definitely liked this poem. very nice! i tried to write one on falling, but i changed it to "Scratching Post" and i'm still developing most of the rythym.
anyways, i really quite liked this one!^^
-Rachel.
*Every legend leaves a mark*
1/14/2005 c1 kyokokrash
wow good love it!
wow good love it!