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2/8/2006 c1 52Lancealot
Nicely done. Where might the dancing go in the twilight?
7/24/2005 c1 Marisa
An outstanding poem, Monica. It flowed very nicely.
4/2/2005 c1 ludicrous louie
wow! that was really good, but i think the end seemed almost cut off. It seemed like it should either go on longer or have another ending line...really good though.
3/30/2005 c1 8A-wolf-called-Skya
well done! i loved how you took the sky in like that.

only one thing didn't quite fit (spelling/grammar error):

"Skipping past as mistress’s cry. . ."

Do you mean "mistress' cry" ? if you were trying for plural, anyway :D j/w

but i loved it! keep it up!

also, if you could help sort out some of my poems with me ( my new ones. i plan on trying to publish my best ones) it would be appreciated!what's been up? you haven't reviewed anymore on dangerous skies. i've jumped up a level again (a chapter 14 i begin to), and i would lovee some more critism (seeming LudicrousLouie has been editing it. . . stpeh is so nice, sometimes!). anyways, can't wait till another write!

-Rachel.

*Every legend leaves a mark*
2/11/2005 c1 13aquamoon222
o! that was really magical, hehe, like you said in ur summary! I really enjoyed it, it was beautiful! But the ending could have been better, that poem deserves a much better ending, don't ya think? You'er very gifted!
2/3/2005 c1 14Cheyenne Kai
pretty
1/15/2005 c1 8Charna
Dude, this is good. And it rhymes...wow...this is a new concept for me to read outside of school. But it was good.
1/13/2005 c1 10Chaco
ooh...ah. =D

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