for Raging Rabbits7/9/2005 c11 
32TRpoison-rose
*wants to stay up all night to read more of your fantastic poetry*Have you ever submitted these to anything...? You should seriously consider it. I've never written enough poetry to try and publish a book of it or anything...but you've got a way with words.Let's see...I liked "Make me a savior" a whole lot. And "Raison d'etre". "That damn fool's love" was very nice, too.
32TRpoison-rose*wants to stay up all night to read more of your fantastic poetry*Have you ever submitted these to anything...? You should seriously consider it. I've never written enough poetry to try and publish a book of it or anything...but you've got a way with words.Let's see...I liked "Make me a savior" a whole lot. And "Raison d'etre". "That damn fool's love" was very nice, too.
6/23/2005 c4 Nobody-n-Particular
Excellent tone, so sombre, so sinister. Really sets the mood for inspiration.
Excellent tone, so sombre, so sinister. Really sets the mood for inspiration.
6/23/2005 c9 11Cloud Burst
i dunno much french but translated does it mean, [the reason to be]?great poem!
11Cloud Bursti dunno much french but translated does it mean, [the reason to be]?great poem!
6/23/2005 c10 119Whisper on the Lips
Oh no this poem is just as wonderful! BTY, thanks for the translation: my french is esentiall only this: Jm'apeel elise ... and that is it. )= Oh,well i like this poem it is beautiful (as is all your work). WRITE ON!(=
119Whisper on the LipsOh no this poem is just as wonderful! BTY, thanks for the translation: my french is esentiall only this: Jm'apeel elise ... and that is it. )= Oh,well i like this poem it is beautiful (as is all your work). WRITE ON!(=
6/21/2005 c9 Whisper on the Lips
that is so beautiful, if only i knew what the last line ment! still am loving this serries. WRITE ON!
that is so beautiful, if only i knew what the last line ment! still am loving this serries. WRITE ON!
6/13/2005 c1 95beti213
I love it! I've seen this sort of sensation attempted and murdered by so many poets that it's really refreshing to see you nail it. there was one piece that bothered me a bit, the *counts lines* 11th line from the end "the gate opens, even after key long lost." I know you phrased it that way to keep the rhythm, but it seems a little awkward as is. I enjoyed this; keep writing!
95beti213I love it! I've seen this sort of sensation attempted and murdered by so many poets that it's really refreshing to see you nail it. there was one piece that bothered me a bit, the *counts lines* 11th line from the end "the gate opens, even after key long lost." I know you phrased it that way to keep the rhythm, but it seems a little awkward as is. I enjoyed this; keep writing!
6/13/2005 c7 119Whisper on the Lips
YOU BROKE THE EVIL BUNNY?
Okay that's fine/( = Very interesting your poems are, very interesting indeed.
*cat lookes pver my shoulder and reads poem, his jaw drops.*
see your poems are so awsome even my cat likes them!
*cat and owner retrevie jaws, but switch jaws*
o, furry chin!WRITE ON!
119Whisper on the LipsYOU BROKE THE EVIL BUNNY?
Okay that's fine/( = Very interesting your poems are, very interesting indeed.
*cat lookes pver my shoulder and reads poem, his jaw drops.*
see your poems are so awsome even my cat likes them!
*cat and owner retrevie jaws, but switch jaws*
o, furry chin!WRITE ON!
6/13/2005 c8 Whisper on the Lips
WHAT! That made no sense and all of sese amd no snse...kid of perverted. BUT COOL. You have great insight. WRITE ON!( =
WHAT! That made no sense and all of sese amd no snse...kid of perverted. BUT COOL. You have great insight. WRITE ON!( =