
7/20/2006 c1
76Princess Diana
Wow! That must have been an incredible dream...Keep up the good work and keep on dreaming! It was amazing as always!

Wow! That must have been an incredible dream...Keep up the good work and keep on dreaming! It was amazing as always!
4/19/2005 c1
8Rozovian G
Well, it's great. From a dream? Hm, I better not attempt that, my dreams are a little more... irrational.
Rhymes... Takes talent. You've got talent. It's both a story and a poem, it's great. That's all I can say.

Well, it's great. From a dream? Hm, I better not attempt that, my dreams are a little more... irrational.
Rhymes... Takes talent. You've got talent. It's both a story and a poem, it's great. That's all I can say.
2/3/2005 c1
7Jack Lumber
Hm...god. I wish i was an angel. But i would be the smiting kind. I would smite people all the time. I'd hunt down whoever sends me SPAM and smite them. I HATE SPAM MAIL!

Hm...god. I wish i was an angel. But i would be the smiting kind. I would smite people all the time. I'd hunt down whoever sends me SPAM and smite them. I HATE SPAM MAIL!
1/8/2005 c1
10Princess Sparkles
Your name is 10,0% correct! You ARE Wicked Awesome. (Oh, and I love the show Wicked, how cool is that? Sorry randomness.) I reall ylike this poem and realized that I myself have also been blind to suffering. I will try my hardest to not let people suffer, and this has taught me a great lesson. Thank you for reviewing my story and no that wasn't it. I will be writing more I just need a little more time. My friend Hinel and I have already planned out the ending so she knows what's going to happen. I'm really excited about this story because I've been thinking aabout it for the past two years. I'm glad you enjoyed and I'm glad that you liked the "Have Yourself A Merry Little Christmas" thing. I'll try to put more of that randomness in there, because I am EXTREMELY random. I have all of this useless knowledge and know absolutely nothing that can help me in the future. How sad is that?

Your name is 10,0% correct! You ARE Wicked Awesome. (Oh, and I love the show Wicked, how cool is that? Sorry randomness.) I reall ylike this poem and realized that I myself have also been blind to suffering. I will try my hardest to not let people suffer, and this has taught me a great lesson. Thank you for reviewing my story and no that wasn't it. I will be writing more I just need a little more time. My friend Hinel and I have already planned out the ending so she knows what's going to happen. I'm really excited about this story because I've been thinking aabout it for the past two years. I'm glad you enjoyed and I'm glad that you liked the "Have Yourself A Merry Little Christmas" thing. I'll try to put more of that randomness in there, because I am EXTREMELY random. I have all of this useless knowledge and know absolutely nothing that can help me in the future. How sad is that?
1/8/2005 c1
72linaeve
a wonderful dream. =P
reminds me of The Raven's format."Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary..."
"No more will the world be tolerant"- a bit awkward & confusing. be tolerant of what: the ignorant people's cruelty? or do you mean that you will not tolerate the world's ignorance?
good job!-lin

a wonderful dream. =P
reminds me of The Raven's format."Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary..."
"No more will the world be tolerant"- a bit awkward & confusing. be tolerant of what: the ignorant people's cruelty? or do you mean that you will not tolerate the world's ignorance?
good job!-lin