8/18/2006 c1 1mochagalor3
I can feel lots of emotions when reading this poem. Good work. I'm looking forward to seeing more poems from you, even though it's been long. :)
I can feel lots of emotions when reading this poem. Good work. I'm looking forward to seeing more poems from you, even though it's been long. :)
1/8/2005 c1 4IsisAvenger
Emotional and extremely well written, thought I really didn't like that you threw in 'crappy' for lack of a better word. Don't get me wrong, it describes what you feel very well, but it just doesn't go with the rest of the piece.
Emotional and extremely well written, thought I really didn't like that you threw in 'crappy' for lack of a better word. Don't get me wrong, it describes what you feel very well, but it just doesn't go with the rest of the piece.