for 9:111/20/2005 c1 Ashua Ayoyame
Holy s-, that was f- scary!
Holy s-, that was f- scary!
1/11/2005 c1 
3Ramada Paperweight
Oh, wow. This is great. My heart was in my chest the whole time. Damn you for getting me so worked up! ;P Awesome tale. I liked the Odyssey reference halfway through. This reminds me a bit of 1408 by Stephen King. If you're a fan of his work, I recommend checking it out. It's found in the book, "Everything's Eventual." Anywho, great job. Keep writing!
3Ramada PaperweightOh, wow. This is great. My heart was in my chest the whole time. Damn you for getting me so worked up! ;P Awesome tale. I liked the Odyssey reference halfway through. This reminds me a bit of 1408 by Stephen King. If you're a fan of his work, I recommend checking it out. It's found in the book, "Everything's Eventual." Anywho, great job. Keep writing!
1/9/2005 c1 11breaker-one
That was a cool story. Truely frightening with a nice twist at the end. However, there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes that hinder the reading at times. Other than that, this was a really good ghost story.
11breaker-oneThat was a cool story. Truely frightening with a nice twist at the end. However, there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes that hinder the reading at times. Other than that, this was a really good ghost story.