for Silent Goodbyes12/25/2013 c1 Guest
my heart's breaking for Gabe T_T ..damn,u write such touching stories!
my heart's breaking for Gabe T_T ..damn,u write such touching stories!
10/31/2011 c1 sausti0202
I thought it was wonderful ... you want to hate Mia and Lawrence, but you can't because they are genuinely kind people, and they love Gabe and are completely unaware that they are hurting him. And Gabe loves them and doesn't want to put his own wants/needs above theirs. These are the type of characters I adore - flawed but with good hearts and intentions.
I thought it was wonderful ... you want to hate Mia and Lawrence, but you can't because they are genuinely kind people, and they love Gabe and are completely unaware that they are hurting him. And Gabe loves them and doesn't want to put his own wants/needs above theirs. These are the type of characters I adore - flawed but with good hearts and intentions.
10/14/2011 c1 
2GoNe RoGuE
That was crutial! I was on the brink of tears! I don't think I'd have been able to go to the wedding or even stay friends with them, but ah well. This was really good even if I did almost want to murder Lawrence.
~Hannah
2GoNe RoGuEThat was crutial! I was on the brink of tears! I don't think I'd have been able to go to the wedding or even stay friends with them, but ah well. This was really good even if I did almost want to murder Lawrence.
~Hannah
6/28/2011 c1 5Marjulie
I feel so sad right now. To Gabe and all the other "Gabe's", I wish you happiness.
5MarjulieI feel so sad right now. To Gabe and all the other "Gabe's", I wish you happiness.
10/28/2009 c1 2Unwritten.prose
Did she mean it in the way Gabe wanted her to when she said 'I love you'?
2Unwritten.proseDid she mean it in the way Gabe wanted her to when she said 'I love you'?
12/5/2008 c1 4LbBabey
That was just well done. Gabe's a really sweet character and I love how you were able to balance out conveying his ambivalence about the wedding. His ideal girl is getting married to someone else; however, it's also his two best friends. It was really a heart breaker, but the ending seemed really optimistic to me. Even though Gabe was heart broken, he was still happy in some respects about the marriage and he tried his best to preserve his friends' special day. I think that was just... It takes a lot of strength for a person to be able to do that, but he isn't perfect and you really showed that in describing his feud with the best maid. I really would have loved to have seen a bit of that in the story. But I guess that's the hallmark of a great story, it always leaves you wanting more.
4LbBabeyThat was just well done. Gabe's a really sweet character and I love how you were able to balance out conveying his ambivalence about the wedding. His ideal girl is getting married to someone else; however, it's also his two best friends. It was really a heart breaker, but the ending seemed really optimistic to me. Even though Gabe was heart broken, he was still happy in some respects about the marriage and he tried his best to preserve his friends' special day. I think that was just... It takes a lot of strength for a person to be able to do that, but he isn't perfect and you really showed that in describing his feud with the best maid. I really would have loved to have seen a bit of that in the story. But I guess that's the hallmark of a great story, it always leaves you wanting more.
8/31/2008 c1 lily
I'm bawling. That was so powerful and sweet and SAD!
I'm bawling. That was so powerful and sweet and SAD!
5/21/2008 c1 Genato
Eek. I was so confused when he was talking about himself at the 3rd person, but having thoughts that should be with "i'. I dunno. It was a good fic though, except those parts. And it could've been more dramatic... longer.. like you could've inserted more memories. It's still good.
Eek. I was so confused when he was talking about himself at the 3rd person, but having thoughts that should be with "i'. I dunno. It was a good fic though, except those parts. And it could've been more dramatic... longer.. like you could've inserted more memories. It's still good.
3/22/2008 c1 9StoryPictures
You made me cry. Seriously, I'm sitting here crying. I'm sure my 5yr old doesn't understand... Very well written.
9StoryPicturesYou made me cry. Seriously, I'm sitting here crying. I'm sure my 5yr old doesn't understand... Very well written.
2/18/2008 c1 nebode
wow
this almost had me in tears
and i think i know what its like.
very, very, VERY well done.
wow
this almost had me in tears
and i think i know what its like.
very, very, VERY well done.