for Side Of Me6/23/2005 c1 
1thestonedfox
okay, so i'm a really late reviewer. but really, this poem is amazing! (and so are the other ones i conveniently forgot to review. i'm a lazy pig.) i don't think i've ever seen a poem quite like this, and that's true for all your other poems. You're different, unique and definitely talented. kudos to your writing.
you and this are going to my faves list, btw.
1thestonedfoxokay, so i'm a really late reviewer. but really, this poem is amazing! (and so are the other ones i conveniently forgot to review. i'm a lazy pig.) i don't think i've ever seen a poem quite like this, and that's true for all your other poems. You're different, unique and definitely talented. kudos to your writing.
you and this are going to my faves list, btw.
4/28/2005 c1 14hellomister
The third to last stanza felt familiar; I can relate. And 'you-resistant skin' is wonderful.
I wouldn't like to lose track of you; you're the newest addition to my favourite authors.
14hellomisterThe third to last stanza felt familiar; I can relate. And 'you-resistant skin' is wonderful.
I wouldn't like to lose track of you; you're the newest addition to my favourite authors.
1/18/2005 c1 75clockwork kiss
Wow. The first stanza rocked. I loved the "possibly and plausibly", for some reason. Contrasted with the surrounding diction, and was alliteration-ed :). I also appreciated the isolation of the "side"s and all of the other enjambment. It was placed wonderfully. The whole thing had a great, not-quite-rhyming-but-still-rythym-based flow to it. Sorry this review's not that helpful, but I am tired and not very smart right now. It deserves better, though. Anyways, it was wonderful and superb, like usual.
Oh, and The Starting Line is a great band!
75clockwork kissWow. The first stanza rocked. I loved the "possibly and plausibly", for some reason. Contrasted with the surrounding diction, and was alliteration-ed :). I also appreciated the isolation of the "side"s and all of the other enjambment. It was placed wonderfully. The whole thing had a great, not-quite-rhyming-but-still-rythym-based flow to it. Sorry this review's not that helpful, but I am tired and not very smart right now. It deserves better, though. Anyways, it was wonderful and superb, like usual.
Oh, and The Starting Line is a great band!
1/16/2005 c1 119AntiPleasure
You fascinate me. Your pieces fascinate me. You have definite talent. =) Therefore, on my favorites you go!
Jenna xoxo
119AntiPleasureYou fascinate me. Your pieces fascinate me. You have definite talent. =) Therefore, on my favorites you go!
Jenna xoxo
1/12/2005 c1 69this is britt
you are the best fourteen year old writer on the planet. give yourself a pat on the back! (boy do I feel like Elton John now)
69this is brittyou are the best fourteen year old writer on the planet. give yourself a pat on the back! (boy do I feel like Elton John now)
1/9/2005 c1 37negligible fictional force
oh my god, it's gorgeous. you are slyvia plath the second. love the words, the structure, the everything. -kismet.
37negligible fictional forceoh my god, it's gorgeous. you are slyvia plath the second. love the words, the structure, the everything. -kismet.
1/9/2005 c1 Made in U.S.A
This is just beyond anything that I could say. Top notch writing really and you have just made my favorites. Keep writing :D
This is just beyond anything that I could say. Top notch writing really and you have just made my favorites. Keep writing :D