
6/7/2008 c1 This is not a name
Sounds like somebody's in love... :D
Wonderfully romantic. Odd, isn't it?
Sounds like somebody's in love... :D
Wonderfully romantic. Odd, isn't it?
10/4/2006 c1
4Sakka-Fenikkusu
What a sweet poem! Bread can write romantic poetry? Who knew? 2 thumbs up! (by the way, you're now on my must reads on my homepage) -Sakka-Fenikkusu

What a sweet poem! Bread can write romantic poetry? Who knew? 2 thumbs up! (by the way, you're now on my must reads on my homepage) -Sakka-Fenikkusu
7/6/2006 c1
879Moondog Dozier
I like the sound and progression of this. It really elevates the mood of the reader. Excellent phrasework, as this is truly audible. Great write.

I like the sound and progression of this. It really elevates the mood of the reader. Excellent phrasework, as this is truly audible. Great write.
3/21/2006 c1
28fuzzy-logik21
Picture in my head: A cute 8 year old or something looking back at his 8 year old crush. that's so cute. love, don't think i've ever been in love. good poem.

Picture in my head: A cute 8 year old or something looking back at his 8 year old crush. that's so cute. love, don't think i've ever been in love. good poem.
1/9/2005 c1 enjoy the silence
You have defidently channeled all your emotions into that poem...kudos...I commend you on it. That is defidently a unique way to describe the feelings of love. Excellenty! I've never been able to give so much imagery into it..so great job...well, maybe I've never tried...sounds like you've newly inspired me.
You have defidently channeled all your emotions into that poem...kudos...I commend you on it. That is defidently a unique way to describe the feelings of love. Excellenty! I've never been able to give so much imagery into it..so great job...well, maybe I've never tried...sounds like you've newly inspired me.