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3/1/2005 c1 19ColdFrost
This is amazing. Great personification throughout the poem. Very well written. I am putting this on my fav. list

~ColdFrost
3/1/2005 c1 8Written
wow. beautiful. the rhythm is very perfect, and the emotions are striking. nice job.
1/12/2005 c1 10Plato's Socialist Democracy
You are a very rhythmic and fun to read writer. It reminds me vaguely of Lewis Carrol's The Walrus and the Carpenter from Through the Looking Glass. I can see your pessimism in it but I still feel the message. Good use of word Comrade.
1/10/2005 c1 WarriorHeart
completely awesome. i love everything about this, the words, the ryhme, the rythm.. you truly showed your talent.
1/10/2005 c1 41Sat Hari
I agree with you in every way possible. I love this poem so much! America and its (good) ways are long gone. I love how it starts off talking about a person, then ends up being a country; a bunch of people. Great job...Amazing...Please R&R some of my work as yours was more than definitly worth reading!

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