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8/2/2005 c1 16amethystdawn
Very philosophical. You have some nice views and ideas. Keep writing. :P Never knew a bubble could mean so much.
2/7/2005 c1 22slave to the voices
Kind of...odd, but a good read. Great descriptions. Nice work, keep writing.

1/30/2005 c1 25Whizzothecrunchyfrog
Whoa. Kinda trippy. But I liked it. Morbid, creepy and fun.
1/14/2005 c1 28Tk.T


Ok. This was...interesting and confusing. To me, it lacked a point.

Happy writing!

1/11/2005 c1 15Gremlins of the Mind
This little jig was beautiful! It put a smile on my face throughout its entirety, and that is an accomplishment considering what has been going on around here lately! I lvoe your work! Keep posting! :D
1/10/2005 c1 14Kymik
he. I like this. Thanks for keeping up on my NaNo story. I totally finished it!Is it just me, or did you clean out your account? I seem to remember there being many more stories. Or I might just be confusing your account with another...Anyways, I thought this piece was great. Very bubbly. How appropriate. Which parts are the song lyrics and which are your own? I don't know the song, so I can't tell. Maybe you could put those parts in italics. Some of the sentences at the beginning were a bit run-on, but I really liked the end - the declaration of the bubble.cheers :)

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